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Swirl with cloud
Black Smoke,
Swirl with voices loud
Now Gods above,
Hear this call.

Red Fire,
Forsake this land
Dark Ash,
Blacken this sand
Now Allah above,
Hear this call.

Bright life,
Grow in chants
Soft fire,
Enlighten with plants
Now spirits around,
Hear this call.

Invoke my right to choke
This poison from my temple;
This is simply a sample,
For the wisdom is ample,

Spiritual ascension
To understand your creation,
Heavens look with applause
Fire of the soul
Light of the mind,
Never stray far
From the path of our laws,

Enhance our minds
Strengthen our bodies
Spiritual assurance
Understand the trance.
Elevate yourself
To the peak of advance,

Dark land,
Fall of imprints
Forsaken men,
Who reject instinct
And favor brother,
Now men around me,
Heed my call.
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Heed My Call

Contributed by MuadDib on Wednesday, 28th August 2013 @ 02:57:06 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

Blue Sky,
Swirl with cloud
Black Smoke,
Swirl with voices loud
Now Gods above,
Hear this call.

Red Fire,
Forsake this land
Dark Ash,
Blacken this sand
Now Allah above,
Hear this call.

Bright life,
Grow in chants
Soft fire,
Enlighten with plants
Now spirits around,
Hear this call.

Invoke my right to choke
This poison from my temple;
This is simply a sample,
For the wisdom is ample,

Spiritual ascension
To understand your creation,
Heavens look with applause
Fire of the soul
Light of the mind,
Never stray far
From the path of our laws,

Enhance our minds
Strengthen our bodies
Spiritual assurance
Understand the trance.
Elevate yourself
To the peak of advance,

Dark land,
Fall of imprints
Forsaken men,
Who reject instinct
And favor brother,
Now men around me,
Heed my call.

Copyright © MuadDib ... [ 2013-08-28 14:57:06]
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Re: Heed My Call (User Rating: 1 )
by pooper on Wednesday, 28th August 2013 @ 04:48:47 PM AEST
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I like it. it flows as I comprehend.
Simply yet eloquently stated.

Thanks

Re: Heed My Call (User Rating: 1 )
by gypsymaddness on Thursday, 29th August 2013 @ 11:02:20 PM AEST
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I like this poem. It reminds me of a chant that you would say to make you stronger. Like it :)

Re: Heed My Call (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Sunday, 20th October 2013 @ 09:39:42 PM AEST
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musical and rhythmic poem, like a chant prayer or mantra, my favourite sort of poem,,, brilliantxxx

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