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Array ( [sid] => 176484 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If you bleed anymore you'll drown Hawaii [time] => 2013-07-09 07:06:34 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The raindrops falling from her eyes
soak the makeup she uses to hide
everything she has locked inside
and we look to her heart and attempt to pride
its secrets away
as she sips her champagne
and leaves the lipstick on the glass
its blood red.
so full of life
without it shes so drained

Even her bloodstream flows with a touch of despair
Just waiting to escape, with the next artery she tears

Bracelets the sweet facade for arms so sliced
Nights she sat alone with her butcher knife
"Life is lonely" she whispered, talking to herself more then me

So she kissed the glass against her crimson lips
as her chest involuntarily rose, but forget to fall
and her heels blistered painfully
as she pressed them into the floor


The waterproof mascara begings to trickle
she rubs her eyes delicately
with the grace of angel but the anger of the devil
they both take a hold of her
Duelling with eachother on both sides of her shoulder
She cant listen to one
And ignore the other
So she drowns another glass
And sits alone in the dark

Well she ‘accidentally’ dropped her cigarette
And it sent fire onto the skin of her leg
Yet those burns glittered like rubies
So she would cut herself only to bleed lipgloss
And push all her darkest thoughts into her precious
glitter box
She swallowed the wine until her stomach could sit with it
no longer
Just to make herself sick
Just so she could feel something [comments] => 2 [counter] => 108 [topic] => 61 [informant] => cherryamber [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
If you bleed anymore you'll drown Hawaii

Contributed by cherryamber on Tuesday, 9th July 2013 @ 07:06:34 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



The raindrops falling from her eyes
soak the makeup she uses to hide
everything she has locked inside
and we look to her heart and attempt to pride
its secrets away
as she sips her champagne
and leaves the lipstick on the glass
its blood red.
so full of life
without it shes so drained

Even her bloodstream flows with a touch of despair
Just waiting to escape, with the next artery she tears

Bracelets the sweet facade for arms so sliced
Nights she sat alone with her butcher knife
"Life is lonely" she whispered, talking to herself more then me

So she kissed the glass against her crimson lips
as her chest involuntarily rose, but forget to fall
and her heels blistered painfully
as she pressed them into the floor


The waterproof mascara begings to trickle
she rubs her eyes delicately
with the grace of angel but the anger of the devil
they both take a hold of her
Duelling with eachother on both sides of her shoulder
She cant listen to one
And ignore the other
So she drowns another glass
And sits alone in the dark

Well she ‘accidentally’ dropped her cigarette
And it sent fire onto the skin of her leg
Yet those burns glittered like rubies
So she would cut herself only to bleed lipgloss
And push all her darkest thoughts into her precious
glitter box
She swallowed the wine until her stomach could sit with it
no longer
Just to make herself sick
Just so she could feel something




Copyright © cherryamber ... [ 2013-07-09 07:06:34]
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Re: If you bleed anymore you'll drown Hawaii (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Tuesday, 9th July 2013 @ 05:41:21 PM AEST
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Sad picture you sketched there.

Greetings
Rus


Re: If you bleed anymore you'll drown Hawaii (User Rating: 1 )
by Sommer on Friday, 12th July 2013 @ 04:00:03 AM AEST
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This is one of the best poems I've ever read on here. Absolutely beautiful. I loved this so much. You have inspired me to try using some different points of view in my work as well. Thank you for sharing




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