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fighting your demns as you lay idle
not knowing how much deep down for me you really care
coming through the battle scattered and torn
it was for you I fought
yet you who lost the waging war
corridors of choices crossing the path
lighting up the way
hope you chose wise
there are no back tracking on my road
make sure the chosen is the one written in stone

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waging a war within

Contributed by phantomvampyress on Friday, 5th July 2013 @ 05:41:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dimensions extensions
fighting your demns as you lay idle
not knowing how much deep down for me you really care
coming through the battle scattered and torn
it was for you I fought
yet you who lost the waging war
corridors of choices crossing the path
lighting up the way
hope you chose wise
there are no back tracking on my road
make sure the chosen is the one written in stone

Vampyress Jenni

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Re: waging a war within (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 6th July 2013 @ 12:40:09 AM AEST
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Dark and deeply moving is my Jen ok??
Pm me k.
Love ya
huggers
Michelle

Re: waging a war within (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 8th July 2013 @ 12:19:04 AM AEST
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Very dark.
Great writing.
Blessings,
emy

Re: waging a war within (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 28th February 2014 @ 07:33:33 PM AEST
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sad but so heartfelt!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: waging a war within (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 22nd April 2014 @ 10:13:30 AM AEST
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Well hello Miss Jennitude! ;)

I can completely relate to this piece! You are right, it is best to keep looking forward on your path through life. When looking back we lose sight of what is before us, missing opportunities and the chance to grow. We cannot live for others if we aren't prepared to live for ourselves. Keep positive, and keep waging that war, and know you are on the right path!

Great job expressing yourself.

~Scorp

Re: waging a war within (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Friday, 24th June 2016 @ 10:54:49 PM AEST
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Good as always (from an old friend - been along time - thanks)

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