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Array ( [sid] => 17641 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Killing Myself Again [time] => 2003-05-16 06:05:00 [hometext] => for those who kill themselves for love. literally. [bodytext] => this bed of knives i lie on
makes you smile inside
you love to see me suffer
i just love to see you smile
constructing my destruction
to draw a laugh from you lips
bleeding myself for your approval
you taste my death in tiny sips
trying to keep your attention
with my OD's and wrist slitting
but, sometimes it seems like it's not enough
and i just feel like quitting
but then, out of pity i assume, you smile
and give me hope that, one day, i might win
your love through my constant pain
then i'm ready to kill myself again

(just a dream, a wish
a frantic thought inside my head
but, maybe you will finally love me
when i am finally dead) [comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Killing Myself Again

Contributed by Cancer on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

this bed of knives i lie on
makes you smile inside
you love to see me suffer
i just love to see you smile
constructing my destruction
to draw a laugh from you lips
bleeding myself for your approval
you taste my death in tiny sips
trying to keep your attention
with my OD's and wrist slitting
but, sometimes it seems like it's not enough
and i just feel like quitting
but then, out of pity i assume, you smile
and give me hope that, one day, i might win
your love through my constant pain
then i'm ready to kill myself again

(just a dream, a wish
a frantic thought inside my head
but, maybe you will finally love me
when i am finally dead)

Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-05-16 06:05:00]
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Re: Killing Myself Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 11:57:14 AM AEST
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Strange how some people's minds work. Most never know what they have until it's far too late. Awesome poem Cancer...it rings true.

Lasca

Re: Killing Myself Again (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 03:06:47 PM AEST
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Oh wow so many times I have thought of doing that just not as eloquently as you put it. Wow don't know what to say. Great write once again man.

Bobo (Joel)

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