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[aid] => mick
[title] => CAN YOU
[time] => 2013-06-25 14:09:41
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[bodytext] => So many times, I wonder
What our luv could do. If we ever touch
The seas would rumble
Igniting Paradice, luv so true.
Can you feel what my heart wonders?
Can you feel
when it skips a beat for you?
Do you know how much I wonna hold you?
Just wonna luv you my life thru.
Waking in your arms would give
Me reason to to shine.
Our tidel wave would rock on
To the end of time.
Why do we wait? The clock
ticks on every day
Come now baby let's
Live our life songs.
always luv, emy
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CAN YOU
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emystar
on
Tuesday, 25th June 2013 @ 02:09:41 PM in AEST
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So many times, I wonder
What our luv could do. If we ever touch
The seas would rumble
Igniting Paradice, luv so true.
Can you feel what my heart wonders?
Can you feel
when it skips a beat for you?
Do you know how much I wonna hold you?
Just wonna luv you my life thru.
Waking in your arms would give
Me reason to to shine.
Our tidel wave would rock on
To the end of time.
Why do we wait? The clock
ticks on every day
Come now baby let's
Live our life songs.
always luv, emy
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emystar
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Re: CAN YOU
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 25th June 2013 @ 02:16:54 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful write as always from you
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by RussellReinhardt on
Tuesday, 25th June 2013 @ 03:28:40 PM AEST
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Hi Emy
Yes full of love, but like the Ladies in waiting from long long ago. Don't be caught in the Victoria age my dear friend. Get up and go after that love of yours. Should you not you will always wonder. Grate write.
Blessings
Rus |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by Jyssvw on
Tuesday, 25th June 2013 @ 04:51:08 PM AEST
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| Tender and meaningful. A way to spice up the same old depressive writes . Great job . |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th June 2013 @ 07:06:41 PM AEST
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| Suweet! |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 26th June 2013 @ 12:13:42 AM AEST
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Emy dear lady go for it! This is filled with warmth and love just like you dear friend. Loved this joy here.
Love you too
hugssss
Michelle |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by scentless_flower on
Friday, 28th June 2013 @ 07:18:03 PM AEST
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| lovely :) |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th June 2013 @ 08:25:01 AM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL I CAN RELATE |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th June 2013 @ 02:44:52 PM AEST
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| Beautiful Write! Emy that is a beautiful write! My name is Jill I used to go by musesonnetlimbo on the old site. I just decided to sign up again today & find some of my old poems & when I did & read them through I also read the comments. Do you know you commented on almost everyone of my poems! I just wanted to take the time to tell you how much that meant to me back then when I would log onto this site and see your sweet positive comments to my writes & I wanted to thank you incase I didnt get a chance to in the past. My last write was in 2005 so its been awhile! Your poems are very beautiful I will be reading more! |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by JohnnyFallen on
Monday, 21st October 2013 @ 02:38:42 AM AEST
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This sounds like it could be turned into a love pop song. :P
Anyway it seems you're quite popular with these poems and I can see why too. The talent you have is outstanding and those who don't see it are crazy. I love this poem, it's got a good tone to it. Don't stop doing what you do because it sure is a blessing to see. :) |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 23rd November 2013 @ 11:28:36 PM AEST
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I wonder about that too
waking up in your arms
hmm
one day....... |
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Re: CAN YOU
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 2nd January 2019 @ 04:37:13 AM AEST
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Beautifully brilliant write.
I loved it! |
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