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Array ( [sid] => 176325 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hush [time] => 2013-06-18 01:06:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's minutes like these,
a moment trapped in time.
A memory,soft,divine
then in the wind its gone.

It's minutes like these,
for a moment I thought...
thought I heard your whisper
in the tree's.

It was just the wind I guess
but still for a moment
a lovely sentiment
that maybe you are still nearby
still around, then I sigh

The storm is blowing in
raindrops coming with the wind
but for now the sun wont die
and she paints herself bold across the sky.

It's moments like this
I feel the stillness of the wind
brushing close across my skin
and I miss you, I miss you again.

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Hush

Contributed by shelby on Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 01:06:33 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

It's minutes like these,
a moment trapped in time.
A memory,soft,divine
then in the wind its gone.

It's minutes like these,
for a moment I thought...
thought I heard your whisper
in the tree's.

It was just the wind I guess
but still for a moment
a lovely sentiment
that maybe you are still nearby
still around, then I sigh

The storm is blowing in
raindrops coming with the wind
but for now the sun wont die
and she paints herself bold across the sky.

It's moments like this
I feel the stillness of the wind
brushing close across my skin
and I miss you, I miss you again.

Image and video hosting by TinyPic

Copyright © shelby ... [ 2013-06-18 01:06:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hush (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 03:23:04 AM AEST
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Hi There

Awe that's heart wrenching. The longing for someone that is gone plays with the mind. Making you believe they are still there when in fact they never will be. I feel it with my mom and dad. This is a very good write make me celebrate my parents all over again. Thanks

Greetings
Rus

Re: Hush (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 02:23:43 PM AEST
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Great write my friend made me think of Mom

Shari

Re: Hush (User Rating: 1 )
by flavellm on Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 04:34:46 PM AEST
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Thats damn good that, heart definitely fluttered a touch reading that. Thanks for sharing

Re: Hush (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 19th June 2013 @ 12:29:28 AM AEST
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Beautiful, girlfriend.
huggs,
emy

Re: Hush (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 19th June 2013 @ 01:14:35 PM AEST
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simply amazing and heartfelt.. love it

vampyress Jenni

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