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when nothing get's done

and destiny's unfulfilled,

when hope is destroyed

instead of employed,

and people end up being

killed . . .

What maddness of sort

created this system?

a spieces so sick such as ours,

that hide's behind doors

configuring wars as easy,

as one picking flowers . . .

Seem's we've become

so adjusted,

to what?

is any ones guess,

when thing's go wrong

it's the same old song

just blame someone else,

for the mess . . .

Are we suppose

to mean something?

if not then why are we

here?

seem's we can't end

this killing trend except

toward election

year . . .

Then it's all smiles

on the faces of power

the shaking of hands

and what not,

for corruption and lies

take less than an hour

when taken,

for all you've got . . .

Ben

my♥svoice

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When Nothing Get's Done . . . Ben

Contributed by myheartsvoice on Monday, 17th June 2013 @ 02:23:59 PM in AEST
Topic: political

What's there to life?

when nothing get's done

and destiny's unfulfilled,

when hope is destroyed

instead of employed,

and people end up being

killed . . .

What maddness of sort

created this system?

a spieces so sick such as ours,

that hide's behind doors

configuring wars as easy,

as one picking flowers . . .

Seem's we've become

so adjusted,

to what?

is any ones guess,

when thing's go wrong

it's the same old song

just blame someone else,

for the mess . . .

Are we suppose

to mean something?

if not then why are we

here?

seem's we can't end

this killing trend except

toward election

year . . .

Then it's all smiles

on the faces of power

the shaking of hands

and what not,

for corruption and lies

take less than an hour

when taken,

for all you've got . . .

Ben

my♥svoice

Copyright © myheartsvoice ... [ 2013-06-17 14:23:59]
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Re: When Nothing Get's Done . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by NightMareShoGun on Monday, 17th June 2013 @ 03:07:55 PM AEST
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nicely done

Re: When Nothing Get's Done . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Monday, 17th June 2013 @ 03:54:00 PM AEST
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It is a mixed up muddled up world. Good write.

Greetings
Rus

Re: When Nothing Get's Done . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 18th June 2013 @ 12:22:28 AM AEST
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Ben we are on the same page always! Love the thought,wisdom and the write.
Hugsssss
Shall

Re: When Nothing Get's Done . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 19th June 2013 @ 02:07:43 AM AEST
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Friend, I was just looking for older poems to post and this was on my mind too.
Well Shelby you too.
Great minds think a like.
huggs,
emy

Re: When Nothing Get's Done . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 28th February 2014 @ 07:37:54 PM AEST
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so true! a beautiful write!

hugs n' love nessa

Re: When Nothing Get's Done . . . Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 4th February 2015 @ 11:29:41 PM AEST
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This is the first time I have read a write like this from you
You penned your thoughts so well and your words ring so true
As beautiful this world can be
Sometimes it can also break our hearts
There is always two sides of the coin

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