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[aid] => mick
[title] => Goodbye to Love
[time] => 2013-06-16 11:40:42
[hometext] => I am a beginner, and I know some parts don't flow that well. Any criticism is welcome.
[bodytext] => Handsome stranger from another land Haunted ghosts and frights of night Took my breath away Under the glowing moon that night grabbed my hand and held it tight Cold water rushing past Toes curling in the sand That fateful kiss he laid upon me Lifted me high above the land Worlds apart Yet so much was similar We never spoke the same language But try as I might to make him see My life was too unfamiliar He built a wall around his heart With bricks so gingerly laid He never let me get inside Of intimacy he was afraid Slowly I chipped away at it To find glimpses of his soul But every time I tore it down He’d shove a brick into the hole I tried to make him see me Told him of my present, future, past But my words he never understood And his feelings faded fast So much I longed for his gentle touch And for that sparkle in his eye Each time I reached out to him he cringed but obligingly he tried Never knowing what went wrong He never spoke to me Didn’t offer any thoughts or chance to talk things through Instead he chose to let it be Friends is all he said we were As if I could ever stop loving So from a distance I must care And in private do my grieving As time goes on My love for him grows Stronger by the day my broken heart won’t seem to mend So many things I long to say But he has moved on And off he goes to find somebody new So in my pillow at night I cry And whisper to him adieu So I must say goodbye to first love And dreams of a future that will never be For I fell in love with him But he merely likes me [comments] => 4 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 22 [informant] => shesthemoon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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