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Array ( [sid] => 17631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Not a star [time] => 2003-05-16 01:05:00 [hometext] => This was the first poem I ever wrote. I thought I'd put it on here just to show how much better of a writer I became. Please feel free to laugh. because I really hate this. [bodytext] => Every where you go someone always has controll.
The tell you how to act what to say and what to wear.
They even try to tell you how to cut your hair.

Well who do they think they are.
Who the hell died and made em a star.
Just who do they think they are.

Have you ever really noticed when you're at work.
That the "really nice" boss is a ***** jerk.
He tells you what to do making a high salary pay.
But he only really works for half the freaking day.

Well who do they think they are.
Who the hell died and made em a star.
Just who do they think they are.

Have you ever had a freind thats close to you.
Follow you around and tell you what to do.
Like "change tha channel" or "lets go here".
Even though you were watching that or happy there.
Even in your own house you do it to be fair.

Tell them who do you think you are.
Who the hell died and made you a star.
Exactly who do you think you are.

Even in the streets there are bossy ones to meet.
Screaming "get out of my road" and "your driving to slow" or "your an *****".

Tell em who do you think you are.
Acting like that don't make you a star.
And acting like that wont get you to far.
Because your not who you think you are. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SuicidalSon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Not a star

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Every where you go someone always has controll.
The tell you how to act what to say and what to wear.
They even try to tell you how to cut your hair.

Well who do they think they are.
Who the hell died and made em a star.
Just who do they think they are.

Have you ever really noticed when you're at work.
That the "really nice" boss is a ***** jerk.
He tells you what to do making a high salary pay.
But he only really works for half the freaking day.

Well who do they think they are.
Who the hell died and made em a star.
Just who do they think they are.

Have you ever had a freind thats close to you.
Follow you around and tell you what to do.
Like "change tha channel" or "lets go here".
Even though you were watching that or happy there.
Even in your own house you do it to be fair.

Tell them who do you think you are.
Who the hell died and made you a star.
Exactly who do you think you are.

Even in the streets there are bossy ones to meet.
Screaming "get out of my road" and "your driving to slow" or "your an *****".

Tell em who do you think you are.
Acting like that don't make you a star.
And acting like that wont get you to far.
Because your not who you think you are.

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-05-16 01:05:00]
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Re: Not a star (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 06:31:48 AM AEST
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I really don't know why you hate this poem. It is written well and it makes a good point. I like it!

sleepless_siren

Re: Not a star (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 09:20:07 AM AEST
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Its not that I hate the poem its that I got fired from my job because of the boss line. Where I worked they liked my poems and let me put them on the message board. And a day after they read it I was fired and have been unable to find a job since.

Re: Not a star (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 09:28:58 AM AEST
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I think this is well written and some of the best poems I have read. It brings a great point and you shouldn't be so down on it.
~Stacie~

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