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Sunshine at my door
A love tries to break in
After it broke out once before

Flames encroach my garden
My white picket fence burned
The stone paved road
Led to my security
Littered with ash
Black soot claims the patterns
Clouds eager to consume
Angels that dwell in the cocoon

Heavenly body
Waits for the time
To pounce on opportunity
Where the luck ran out
Preparations for dinner
A thaw is in progress
Frozen hearts
Beaten minds
Climb from the abyss
Enter a stream of consciousness

Take what is given
Not a penny more
Thoughts withhold secrets of the soul
Speak until your words are no more
Silence claims
Your given name
Steals back your small part of the world

_______
___
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Steady Fall

Contributed by jyssvw on Thursday, 13th June 2013 @ 08:31:25 PM in AEST
Topic: poets

Thunder outside my window
Sunshine at my door
A love tries to break in
After it broke out once before

Flames encroach my garden
My white picket fence burned
The stone paved road
Led to my security
Littered with ash
Black soot claims the patterns
Clouds eager to consume
Angels that dwell in the cocoon

Heavenly body
Waits for the time
To pounce on opportunity
Where the luck ran out
Preparations for dinner
A thaw is in progress
Frozen hearts
Beaten minds
Climb from the abyss
Enter a stream of consciousness

Take what is given
Not a penny more
Thoughts withhold secrets of the soul
Speak until your words are no more
Silence claims
Your given name
Steals back your small part of the world

_______
___

Copyright © jyssvw ... [ 2013-06-13 20:31:25]
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Re: Steady Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 13th June 2013 @ 10:38:30 PM AEST
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Great work of art.
Big blessings,
emy

Re: Steady Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Friday, 14th June 2013 @ 06:15:11 AM AEST
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Good very Good. We fall and yet we must get up. Like this one.

Greetings
Rus

Re: Steady Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 19th June 2013 @ 07:28:03 PM AEST
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another well written poem from you

vampyress jenni

Re: Steady Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 27th December 2013 @ 08:17:49 PM AEST
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Fantastic. Some great lines in this. Hard to pick a favourite, but wonderfully thought-provoking. I have to read this again. Well done!

~Scorp

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