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cause my insides don’t do a good enough job of filling

the hole. All the world’s blood in a single transfusion

wouldn’t be enough to quieten down the entity that

screams inside me

If only those hours in solitude could pay your debts

They wouldnt believe me if I spoke about it

anyway - the constant feeling as though you’ve done

wrong

As if your presence is enough alone for all the

world’s goodness to be overthrown. and thats why I

need something else? You know. Like pot, vodka or

house wine. Anything that gives me the option of

death or being so wasted you feel dead

That hole in your stomach that can’t be filled with the

mundane of life. All the love, the blood of everyone out

there, would not even filter through a single

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Pot, Vodka or House Wine

Contributed by cherryamber on Saturday, 8th June 2013 @ 05:16:27 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

thats why I need something else, you know

cause my insides don’t do a good enough job of filling

the hole. All the world’s blood in a single transfusion

wouldn’t be enough to quieten down the entity that

screams inside me

If only those hours in solitude could pay your debts

They wouldnt believe me if I spoke about it

anyway - the constant feeling as though you’ve done

wrong

As if your presence is enough alone for all the

world’s goodness to be overthrown. and thats why I

need something else? You know. Like pot, vodka or

house wine. Anything that gives me the option of

death or being so wasted you feel dead

That hole in your stomach that can’t be filled with the

mundane of life. All the love, the blood of everyone out

there, would not even filter through a single

particle

Copyright Â© cherryamber ... [ 2013-06-08 05:16:27]
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Re: Pot, Vodka or House Wine (User Rating: 1 )
by scentless_flower on Saturday, 8th June 2013 @ 03:01:55 PM AEST
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the simplest words can reveal the deepest things.
this is why i love poetry, this is why i think this is beautiful :)

Re: Pot, Vodka or House Wine (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th June 2013 @ 12:29:12 AM AEST
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went, spent, along the way regurgitating it --- " all the love, the blood of everyone out there, would not even filter through a single particle" I think this is quite naturally getting at the truth which seems impossible to actually state. It's very good poetry, for lack of a better name.
There's a rational coherent reality behind it. I like it a lot.
I was struck by the title, and then it sort of mixed like a good elixir always should. Keep up the great writing!

Peace!

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