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I felt only bliss
I never realized the danger
as you hypnotized me
with your kiss.
I will never forget
the way that things changed
like Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde
you transformed
right before my eyes,
like the road runner
I tried to run
but you can't escape a vampire
when they're smelling blood.

I use to be so happy
now
I no longer dream,
I have no need for love
ever since I licked your poison lips.
you keep me off balance
as you beautifully deceive
and
you come see me
only when you need to feed,
from this burning confusion
I need to escape
but it's so hard to do
with hands made of clay.

no more
I don't want it
stop spellbinding me with your kiss-
your witches brew
is bubbling
with the Ill elixir,
you only love me
when you need to feed.....
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Vampires Kiss

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 1st June 2013 @ 11:38:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

when we first met
I felt only bliss
I never realized the danger
as you hypnotized me
with your kiss.
I will never forget
the way that things changed
like Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde
you transformed
right before my eyes,
like the road runner
I tried to run
but you can't escape a vampire
when they're smelling blood.

I use to be so happy
now
I no longer dream,
I have no need for love
ever since I licked your poison lips.
you keep me off balance
as you beautifully deceive
and
you come see me
only when you need to feed,
from this burning confusion
I need to escape
but it's so hard to do
with hands made of clay.

no more
I don't want it
stop spellbinding me with your kiss-
your witches brew
is bubbling
with the Ill elixir,
you only love me
when you need to feed.....

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2013-06-01 23:38:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Vampires Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by MickyTwo1984 on Sunday, 2nd June 2013 @ 08:26:22 AM AEST
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Liked and shared. Tyfs.

Re: Vampires Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 2nd June 2013 @ 07:54:18 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this write.. its very emotionally dark.. I like the metaphors you used to describe feelings.. awesome job

vampyress Jenni

Re: Vampires Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 25th May 2014 @ 04:26:46 PM AEST
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sounds like its time for somebody new, one who
loves you for you not just 'cause you are a tasty
snack; this also includes psychic vampires who
also suck

hugs n' love nessa

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