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Pale and bewildered against love’s broad shoulders
The luster of confidence slowly grew white and pure
In little moments forward, euphoric and carefree

Light-years were spent in fractions of a lifetime
On lilting hope, feather-light on choices
With dreams pegged on rainbows, and the sun in their secrets
They walked into the world as the night caught the dark

But then the dark world clawed its reach on Love
Lampooning Trust and her fragile existence
They sold her to Age, the waste-yard of Life
And Love wouldn’t look beyond the mist of fate

Life grows her stories around the tides of change
Orphaning some and surrogate to the rest
Some care with caution, and some with their lives
Turns in the Universe when futures resign to dishonor…
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Turns in the Universe

Contributed by Sasha on Tuesday, 28th May 2013 @ 10:44:27 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Trust once took a hesitant step sideways
Pale and bewildered against love’s broad shoulders
The luster of confidence slowly grew white and pure
In little moments forward, euphoric and carefree

Light-years were spent in fractions of a lifetime
On lilting hope, feather-light on choices
With dreams pegged on rainbows, and the sun in their secrets
They walked into the world as the night caught the dark

But then the dark world clawed its reach on Love
Lampooning Trust and her fragile existence
They sold her to Age, the waste-yard of Life
And Love wouldn’t look beyond the mist of fate

Life grows her stories around the tides of change
Orphaning some and surrogate to the rest
Some care with caution, and some with their lives
Turns in the Universe when futures resign to dishonor…

Copyright Â© Sasha ... [ 2013-05-28 10:44:27]
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Re: Turns in the Universe (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 28th May 2013 @ 03:30:13 PM AEST
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this is a beautiful flowing write. I love every single word but the ending wow!!!! So lovely

Michelle

Re: Turns in the Universe (User Rating: 1 )
by MickyTwo1984 on Wednesday, 29th May 2013 @ 07:49:56 AM AEST
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I loved it. Tyfs.

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