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Array ( [sid] => 176122 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MY LOVE IS AN ATM MACHINE [time] => 2013-05-22 22:53:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => we had fun with my Capital One card
and when I gave you the Discover card
you called me every night
and sung to me how much you loved me
in such dignified and refined a voice

whenever you hear me say boldly
charge it charge it charge it to the MasterCard
you are a charmer with your lips smiling
when we go shopping for your shoes
and the Visa Card supplied the pleasures
I hear you say: use me as you will all night

but now that the cards are gone and I seek refuge
with Consumer Credit Counseling Services
you hate to hear me call your name
now that we no longer can charge it
you detest my footprints at your door
and curse the day we met

now you cut this heart out and snip it
chop it into little pieces and charge it not
to your touch nor to the songs of old
many say the payback is mirthless
our love was just an ATM machine

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MY LOVE IS AN ATM MACHINE

Contributed by padmorea on Wednesday, 22nd May 2013 @ 10:53:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

we had fun with my Capital One card
and when I gave you the Discover card
you called me every night
and sung to me how much you loved me
in such dignified and refined a voice

whenever you hear me say boldly
charge it charge it charge it to the MasterCard
you are a charmer with your lips smiling
when we go shopping for your shoes
and the Visa Card supplied the pleasures
I hear you say: use me as you will all night

but now that the cards are gone and I seek refuge
with Consumer Credit Counseling Services
you hate to hear me call your name
now that we no longer can charge it
you detest my footprints at your door
and curse the day we met

now you cut this heart out and snip it
chop it into little pieces and charge it not
to your touch nor to the songs of old
many say the payback is mirthless
our love was just an ATM machine

Copyright © padmorea ... [ 2013-05-22 22:53:29]
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Re: MY LOVE IS AN ATM MACHINE (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 22nd May 2013 @ 11:42:47 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Great writing and I luv the title and what it's about
Blessings and happy writing,
emy

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