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Array ( [sid] => 176108 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shivering Love [time] => 2013-05-21 17:20:43 [hometext] => I wrote this for my mother who gave up on me years ago. [bodytext] => Flowers on a cross remain
crimson sand to breathe
Withered whispers make the inscision
ashes seeking salvation beneath


Buried answers to the deaf
Enslaved lullaby to the crimes
Paralyzed ambition to the sickness
Hollow prayers to the malign

Mother;can i make beauty stay. . . ?

Snow-music on the window pane
Empty doors to break in
Screaming silence breaks the symphony
Ensconced decadance delivers shame

Careless realism costs souls
Jaded idealism mocks my sacrifice
Vilifying verses severs the cord
Rested nightmares baptise the ghouls

Mother;can i make beauty stay if I. . . ?

Rustic needles on innocent veins
Stranded visions battle forgiveness
Kindled seizures stir the dust
Pantheistic plague veils my lust

Rejection gifted to the gifted
Blind lead the blind
I wait to escape purgatory
Kind forsake their kind

Oh mother; can i make beauty stay if I take my life away ?

Be still my son; you are home
oh when did you become so cold ?
You have such oceans within
Try to save them more,bleed no more
The blade will keep on descending
Search for beauty find your shore
All you need is to feel my love
cascading

(Its a little raw i guess.Please comment and let me know your thoughts.I Would be Grateful .)
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Shivering Love

Contributed by shallow on Tuesday, 21st May 2013 @ 05:20:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Flowers on a cross remain
crimson sand to breathe
Withered whispers make the inscision
ashes seeking salvation beneath


Buried answers to the deaf
Enslaved lullaby to the crimes
Paralyzed ambition to the sickness
Hollow prayers to the malign

Mother;can i make beauty stay. . . ?

Snow-music on the window pane
Empty doors to break in
Screaming silence breaks the symphony
Ensconced decadance delivers shame

Careless realism costs souls
Jaded idealism mocks my sacrifice
Vilifying verses severs the cord
Rested nightmares baptise the ghouls

Mother;can i make beauty stay if I. . . ?

Rustic needles on innocent veins
Stranded visions battle forgiveness
Kindled seizures stir the dust
Pantheistic plague veils my lust

Rejection gifted to the gifted
Blind lead the blind
I wait to escape purgatory
Kind forsake their kind

Oh mother; can i make beauty stay if I take my life away ?

Be still my son; you are home
oh when did you become so cold ?
You have such oceans within
Try to save them more,bleed no more
The blade will keep on descending
Search for beauty find your shore
All you need is to feel my love
cascading

(Its a little raw i guess.Please comment and let me know your thoughts.I Would be Grateful .)




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Re: Shivering Love (User Rating: 1 )
by karu on Tuesday, 21st May 2013 @ 11:07:09 PM AEST
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no other,
like mother

superrrrrrr creation GOD bless you


Re: Shivering Love (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Thursday, 30th September 2021 @ 01:08:35 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem. Thank you for your kind words on my own. I re-read my poems sometimes when im feeling down, and your comment on shade of the forest always cheers me up. This is such a lovely piece. So much feeling and depth. No one should ever feel their mother has given up on them. I hope you have found peace in your life, and realize that every person has value, even if their family cannot see it.




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