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Array ( [sid] => 176095 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I fell for love [time] => 2013-05-20 05:41:06 [hometext] => is is my first submitted poem:-) [bodytext] => I stood up for love and fell for you
A big mistake I should've knew
Secrets kept truth untold
Listening as the lies unfold
Your a pro you knew what to do
I'm better than this to good for you
Twisting words to make them beautiful
I look at you shake my head so pitiful
So many words left unspoken
My heart on the ground left broken
Look in my eyes and see what you did to me
Look at the scars you left so painfully
Who's fault? me you or was it her?
Red haze madness it was all a blur
A beautiful messed up tragedy
This ain't what I thought love would be
Didn't mean to call me her name it was a mixup
You f'd up tell that hoe to come pick you up
I'm fed up to late to cover up just shut up
I'm done.
You better run from my smoking gun
I'm so through I don't know what to do
Get packing I'm done with you boo.
I stood up for love and fell for you
P.s just to let you know I cheated too. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 105 [topic] => 22 [informant] => mimichilds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I fell for love

Contributed by mimichilds on Monday, 20th May 2013 @ 05:41:06 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I stood up for love and fell for you
A big mistake I should've knew
Secrets kept truth untold
Listening as the lies unfold
Your a pro you knew what to do
I'm better than this to good for you
Twisting words to make them beautiful
I look at you shake my head so pitiful
So many words left unspoken
My heart on the ground left broken
Look in my eyes and see what you did to me
Look at the scars you left so painfully
Who's fault? me you or was it her?
Red haze madness it was all a blur
A beautiful messed up tragedy
This ain't what I thought love would be
Didn't mean to call me her name it was a mixup
You f'd up tell that hoe to come pick you up
I'm fed up to late to cover up just shut up
I'm done.
You better run from my smoking gun
I'm so through I don't know what to do
Get packing I'm done with you boo.
I stood up for love and fell for you
P.s just to let you know I cheated too.

Copyright © mimichilds ... [ 2013-05-20 05:41:06]
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Re: I fell for love (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 20th May 2013 @ 01:20:52 PM AEST
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A few misspellings but a good poem nonetheless And welcome to YPDC.

Re: I fell for love (User Rating: 1 )
by CharM on Monday, 20th May 2013 @ 08:01:18 PM AEST
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Great first poem! At least you got the last laugh. Well done!

And yes you had a few spellings wrong. "too" good for you; "too" late to cover up

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