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Array ( [sid] => 176072 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Miss You [time] => 2013-05-17 16:07:30 [hometext] => A song about lost love and more [bodytext] => So here we are
in this place again
together but wavering
in the stormy seas of life

And for a time
I thought I would jump in that lake
where I would drown deep in your love
but that time is forsaken

And when you left
theres a part of me
that everyday still dies

(Chorus 1)
I miss you

So here we are
you are with another love
but you say you want this time
just to be with me

That time is gone
never more to return
in the fire love now burns
that can never be quite quenched

And in my soul
I know its wrong
how can I let you return

though I miss you

(Chorus 2)
(I miss the days I sang to you
at midnight under the moon
holding on all night long
cause we had a love so strong
Walking down the piers of life
knowing nothing could make love light
thinking this love would go on for for ever)

But now you're gone
and I must admit
though we must be apart

I miss you

Note; This song is still unfinished, but I thought it could be posted after 6 years of work. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Archie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

I Miss You

Contributed by Archie on Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 04:07:30 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

So here we are
in this place again
together but wavering
in the stormy seas of life

And for a time
I thought I would jump in that lake
where I would drown deep in your love
but that time is forsaken

And when you left
theres a part of me
that everyday still dies

(Chorus 1)
I miss you

So here we are
you are with another love
but you say you want this time
just to be with me

That time is gone
never more to return
in the fire love now burns
that can never be quite quenched

And in my soul
I know its wrong
how can I let you return

though I miss you

(Chorus 2)
(I miss the days I sang to you
at midnight under the moon
holding on all night long
cause we had a love so strong
Walking down the piers of life
knowing nothing could make love light
thinking this love would go on for for ever)

But now you're gone
and I must admit
though we must be apart

I miss you

Note; This song is still unfinished, but I thought it could be posted after 6 years of work.

Copyright © Archie ... [ 2013-05-17 16:07:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 17th May 2013 @ 07:14:32 PM AEST
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this is tragically beauitiful.. I love the emotion in it and its so well done!! awesome job!!

Re: I Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 18th May 2013 @ 12:40:48 AM AEST
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Great writing friend. I know it's hard but life goes on.
At least you seem to have come to grips that it's time to let it go.
Awesome song. I'd luv to hear you sing it.
Big huggs, blessings, sssssmiles,
emy

Re: I Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 18th May 2013 @ 01:34:32 PM AEST
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Beautiful

Michelle

Re: I Miss You (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 23rd May 2014 @ 02:23:42 PM AEST
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absolutely b e a u t i f u l!!!! i love every line! one of
your very best for sure my friend, it is exquisite,

hugs n' love nessa

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