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Array ( [sid] => 176002 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => See Who I Am [time] => 2013-05-09 12:07:58 [hometext] => This is an introduction song, [bodytext] => I once wished I were some one else
like that guy in the movies
who always gets the girl
or has the best friends
a crowd's gathered around
granting all his dreams
but its not who I am

Maybe my words do not rhyme
or have that right sound
that you want to hear
when standing in crowds
that scream and cheer
with a melody
but they are words from my heart

And if you listen closely
You'll hear my silent melody
and dance to my listless beat
that you hear in your heart

So don't dismiss all my words
like a resounding clanging
they're not so absurd
if you look for my meaning
then you'll dance and you'll sing
keeping to my beat
seeing just who I am

Note; I know people want to hear how it sounds, one day i will find a way to post music but for now words are all i have. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 317 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Archie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

See Who I Am

Contributed by Archie on Thursday, 9th May 2013 @ 12:07:58 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I once wished I were some one else
like that guy in the movies
who always gets the girl
or has the best friends
a crowd's gathered around
granting all his dreams
but its not who I am

Maybe my words do not rhyme
or have that right sound
that you want to hear
when standing in crowds
that scream and cheer
with a melody
but they are words from my heart

And if you listen closely
You'll hear my silent melody
and dance to my listless beat
that you hear in your heart

So don't dismiss all my words
like a resounding clanging
they're not so absurd
if you look for my meaning
then you'll dance and you'll sing
keeping to my beat
seeing just who I am

Note; I know people want to hear how it sounds, one day i will find a way to post music but for now words are all i have.

Copyright © Archie ... [ 2013-05-09 12:07:58]
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Re: See Who I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by karu on Thursday, 9th May 2013 @ 12:37:19 PM AEST
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you wrote ,what you feel
very nice

Re: See Who I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Saturday, 11th May 2013 @ 02:25:38 PM AEST
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It's a great start. Keep pushing for your dreams.

Re: See Who I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 28th April 2014 @ 09:16:05 PM AEST
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this is lovely; maybe you could pm mick puttock
and ask him, then we all could hear, i know if you
make a midi thing and add it to your poem it
works 'cause i've done it, pm me when you figure
it out please.....

hugs n' love nessa

Re: See Who I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 19th December 2014 @ 10:01:55 AM AEST
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I was creeping your page recently and read this awesome write and some others I'll get back to as well. This one stands out for the longing in your words. The loudest in the crowd is sometimes just noisy. ;) Rhyme or not, your melody is music to a special someone's ears.
Great expression in this heartfelt piece.

~Scorp

Re: See Who I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Tuesday, 1st September 2015 @ 04:04:44 PM AEST
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I really don't like commenting on a person's work. I always look for the best in their writing and meaning. But the best I read in this is that you are correct in the silent melody, and I can't hear your song. I will keep reading hoping to leave you a better comment.

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