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Array ( [sid] => 175976 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Brain Storm [time] => 2013-05-07 08:36:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm letting the world get to me
Letting myself get to me
What the world REALLY is
Is not where I live

Constantly overthinking
So much I've lost touch with reality
Almost can't even remember what its like to stop and be free

Walking around in this haze, this daze, my eyes glazed
The storm inside my head growing more complex and un-neededly negative

I want so bad to go back in time
To the days when everything was okay
When my mind didn't attack its own home

Who knows though
I've had good times and I've had bad
A roller coaster like anyone else has had
But I can't forget, that as the months pass
My memories are perfected, pedastalled and protected
But its not my past that needs reflected
It's the now that's being neglected
In this moment, my mind, my self worth, my very being
The simple beauty of life is what I'm not seeing

Its been so long since my mind was simple
No smart phones, no facebook, no competing with evil
It used to be when I woke up all I had on my mind
Was some Saturday cartoons and the sun that shined [comments] => 0 [counter] => 59 [topic] => 21 [informant] => asschinann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Brain Storm

Contributed by asschinann on Tuesday, 7th May 2013 @ 08:36:03 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



I'm letting the world get to me
Letting myself get to me
What the world REALLY is
Is not where I live

Constantly overthinking
So much I've lost touch with reality
Almost can't even remember what its like to stop and be free

Walking around in this haze, this daze, my eyes glazed
The storm inside my head growing more complex and un-neededly negative

I want so bad to go back in time
To the days when everything was okay
When my mind didn't attack its own home

Who knows though
I've had good times and I've had bad
A roller coaster like anyone else has had
But I can't forget, that as the months pass
My memories are perfected, pedastalled and protected
But its not my past that needs reflected
It's the now that's being neglected
In this moment, my mind, my self worth, my very being
The simple beauty of life is what I'm not seeing

Its been so long since my mind was simple
No smart phones, no facebook, no competing with evil
It used to be when I woke up all I had on my mind
Was some Saturday cartoons and the sun that shined




Copyright © asschinann ... [ 2013-05-07 08:36:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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