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Array ( [sid] => 17596 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ~*~ I Love You ~*~ [time] => 2003-05-15 07:35:00 [hometext] => Uncertain moments in life often occur where love is involved and a moment can feel like an eternity.... [bodytext] => “I love you”, slips from off my lips,
Unconsciously my secret slips,
As heart and breath become quite still,
This frozen moment saps my will.

And in the silence doubt does grow,
As hope denies the fear I know,
Emotional chaos seethes within,
And I feel my love is just a sin.

Yet every thought is one of you,
And no one else will ever do,
‘Cause only you can make me feel,
This lonely world is something real.

What would I do if you denied,
All I’ve felt for you inside,
And can I live while my dreams die,
Knowing that I’ve lived a lie?

But as I look into your eyes,
The truth’s revealed and my heart cries,
As lips of velvet start to speak,
A tear falls gently down my cheek.

By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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~*~ I Love You ~*~

Contributed by wordpoet on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

“I love you”, slips from off my lips,
Unconsciously my secret slips,
As heart and breath become quite still,
This frozen moment saps my will.

And in the silence doubt does grow,
As hope denies the fear I know,
Emotional chaos seethes within,
And I feel my love is just a sin.

Yet every thought is one of you,
And no one else will ever do,
‘Cause only you can make me feel,
This lonely world is something real.

What would I do if you denied,
All I’ve felt for you inside,
And can I live while my dreams die,
Knowing that I’ve lived a lie?

But as I look into your eyes,
The truth’s revealed and my heart cries,
As lips of velvet start to speak,
A tear falls gently down my cheek.

By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com

Copyright Â© wordpoet ... [ 2003-05-15 07:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: ~*~ I Love You ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 07:39:47 AM AEST
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Oh Doug ... superb, breathtaking, this is my favourite of yours now - but I am crying for you ... so heartbreaking ... but such beautiful poetry :((((((((((( Jan

Re: ~*~ I Love You ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 10:29:09 AM AEST
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Doug this is a breath taking poem. I wish you well.
Michelle

Re: ~*~ I Love You ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 01:48:23 PM AEST
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Ya know Doug..I have read your work pretty much since you started posting here...and I have always loved your work..and you just keep getting better at it. This is soooooooooooooo good!!

Re: ~*~ I Love You ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 10:09:48 PM AEST
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~wow~ this is such a beautiful write! each line held me spellbound to the next in your vivid poem! write on! hugs nessa

Re: ~*~ I Love You ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 01:06:07 AM AEST
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Truly an amazing write, Doug.... especially loved the first verse...and the last....
Jenni

Re: ~*~ I Love You ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 08:02:05 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem, such a smooth read. Unfortunately it had to end.

Re: ~*~ I Love You ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 06:36:21 PM AEST
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Doug, this poem is simply beautiful. The depth of your feelings is abundantly clear. Dot

Re: ~*~ I Love You ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 08:56:14 AM AEST
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AAAHHH Doug this was so heartwarming!
It really was from your heart! Well done ! Christina

Re: ~*~ I Love You ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:11:44 PM AEST
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Hmmm..This was a beauty Doug,written with absolute grace...I'm HOOKED! :o)~*1000 stars*~
PumpkinPie

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