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Array ( [sid] => 175910 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your tongue [time] => 2013-05-01 07:42:57 [hometext] => This is a poem that i wrote about my stepmother and me dealing with my eating disorder. I am not from an English speaking country so please excuse my spelling errors. [bodytext] => Your tongue.

Your tongue is a snake,
That knows when to bite,
My word is a toad,
trying to fight,
I know what to say,
But your word beats mine,
I know what I feel,
But I should be fine,
When you have talked the truth is sat,
You are smart you are wicked,
I can´t argue with that,
I get it I'm wrong,
If you say it it´s true,
I`m just not that strong,
I`m just not like you.
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Your tongue

Contributed by Helenesovig on Wednesday, 1st May 2013 @ 07:42:57 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Your tongue.

Your tongue is a snake,
That knows when to bite,
My word is a toad,
trying to fight,
I know what to say,
But your word beats mine,
I know what I feel,
But I should be fine,
When you have talked the truth is sat,
You are smart you are wicked,
I can´t argue with that,
I get it I'm wrong,
If you say it it´s true,
I`m just not that strong,
I`m just not like you.




Copyright © Helenesovig ... [ 2013-05-01 07:42:57]
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Re: Your tongue (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 1st May 2013 @ 09:20:49 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.

This is sad but very good writing.
You shouldn't let any one talk down to you.
I've just met you but I can tell you have talent and are a good person.

No one has the right to judge you like that.
Be who you are .
huggs, Blessings,
emy


Re: Your tongue (User Rating: 1 )
by stevenfloyd on Monday, 27th May 2013 @ 06:18:47 PM AEST
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I take it this was written about the one you said fooled you. very good though, nice write




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