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Array ( [sid] => 175823 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Used and Abused , Back for More [time] => 2013-04-23 08:23:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's been a struggle
To move forward with life

It's been memorable
Your incision with the knife

You cut my heart out
As you told me goodbye

Oh how I've wasted
An opportunity to fly


You are logical
A well developed response to all I say

Standing strong, I can't argue with the truth
Your conviction won't stray

Flipped my life upside down
Now I can't find my way

Lost in endless depression
I have no strength to get up,
no strength to walk away


Heavy breathing
My trembling finger dials your number

You turn as you are leaving
I beg you for another

A chance at love
Our lives should be lived together

When I asked you if you loved me
You told me yes, "forever"


Separated by your words
We now sleep apart

Because of your thoughts
I am alone, drunk, in the dark

Your actions have proved fateful
You wanted a new start

I thought of us as inseparable
A fool chasing the beat of his own heart


Unacceptable
I have yet to come to grips

With my reality
And how this piece of the puzzle fits

They say it will make me stronger
I have lost the will to live

They say I will love again
How can I?
I have no more love to give

-------
--












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Used and Abused , Back for More

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 08:23:35 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



It's been a struggle
To move forward with life

It's been memorable
Your incision with the knife

You cut my heart out
As you told me goodbye

Oh how I've wasted
An opportunity to fly


You are logical
A well developed response to all I say

Standing strong, I can't argue with the truth
Your conviction won't stray

Flipped my life upside down
Now I can't find my way

Lost in endless depression
I have no strength to get up,
no strength to walk away


Heavy breathing
My trembling finger dials your number

You turn as you are leaving
I beg you for another

A chance at love
Our lives should be lived together

When I asked you if you loved me
You told me yes, "forever"


Separated by your words
We now sleep apart

Because of your thoughts
I am alone, drunk, in the dark

Your actions have proved fateful
You wanted a new start

I thought of us as inseparable
A fool chasing the beat of his own heart


Unacceptable
I have yet to come to grips

With my reality
And how this piece of the puzzle fits

They say it will make me stronger
I have lost the will to live

They say I will love again
How can I?
I have no more love to give

-------
--
















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Re: Used and Abused , Back for More (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagefairy on Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 08:27:54 AM AEST
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Well... this emotionally poignant poem touched me. Blessings, SF


Re: Used and Abused , Back for More (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy on Tuesday, 23rd April 2013 @ 10:11:54 PM AEST
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jyss, it has been a while since I read you and it is awesome to see you are
still making the page bleed . Your words continue to stain as your
emotion drips from every line. That last verse is frighteningly familiar ~

Outstanding !!

~ Breezy




Re: Used and Abused , Back for More (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 3rd November 2014 @ 01:32:58 PM AEST
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This rocks!!!! Not the crummy RL stuff that inspired this, but the realness. A barrage of honesty exposing raw skin. Wow!


Well done with those opening two stanzas, and that ending that suffocates. Amazed!



~Scorp




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