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The wind brushed against my hair and all was calm no worries on my mind...
Your sweet scent, your warm hands and spell binding smile made me want to jump into your chest and dream of what we could be.
Looking at you was like looking at a waterfall caught up in a wave of high, euphoric feeling that did not end till I turned away... From day one i had wished to hold you that I may feel secure. Give you a kiss so that my heart could be filled with bliss. At last the time had come for that kiss...
As our eyes lock and stare deeply into our souls; our bodies come close and I touch your hair. We are both afraid to embrace this moment... Heart pounding, cold hands shaking, time frozen in our favor... I close my eyes...
I lean in to give you a kiss; only to realize that just like the wind you were gone...
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Gone

Contributed by poet17 on Monday, 22nd April 2013 @ 08:50:44 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical

The day I met you my heart melted. My eyes went glassy and I almost fainted.
The wind brushed against my hair and all was calm no worries on my mind...
Your sweet scent, your warm hands and spell binding smile made me want to jump into your chest and dream of what we could be.
Looking at you was like looking at a waterfall caught up in a wave of high, euphoric feeling that did not end till I turned away... From day one i had wished to hold you that I may feel secure. Give you a kiss so that my heart could be filled with bliss. At last the time had come for that kiss...
As our eyes lock and stare deeply into our souls; our bodies come close and I touch your hair. We are both afraid to embrace this moment... Heart pounding, cold hands shaking, time frozen in our favor... I close my eyes...
I lean in to give you a kiss; only to realize that just like the wind you were gone...

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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagefairy on Monday, 22nd April 2013 @ 02:25:21 PM AEST
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Aw... sweet! "From day one I had wished to hold you that I may feel secure." That's pretty much what we all want, at least eventually. Nice work!
Sorry she was like the wind...
Blessings, SF

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