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Array ( [sid] => 175807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LANDING ON HEART ROLLING OVER SOUL [time] => 2013-04-21 04:39:46 [hometext] => for you my SECOND_HEART [bodytext] => your feeling landing on heart....,
rolling over soul,
thanks for giving me reason,
thanks for giving me a goal,
mind has many choice for lady love,
but love has chosen you for this role,
before i become someone's husband take me in
your control

your feeling landing on heart....,
rolling over soul,
let them come to me,
don't let them seize,
it is for me,
don't let them freeze,
i am not asking you to do anything,
but don't stop them please,
for health of my heart ,
it will work like a cheese

your feeling landing on heart....,
rolling over soul,
saying me she love you,
giving me a dream new,
whenever i ask about my second_heart,
it(feelings) says
she is playing her part,
thus why she is sending you her emotion on GOD'S cart,
each and every night,
through the dream made flight,

your feeling landing on heart....,
rolling over soul,
when my eyes try to go under wink,
and heart want to drink,
your sweet memory through the LOVE LINK,
under the star's blink ,
at the time when night started to sink
and what is going on,
mind can't even think

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LANDING ON HEART ROLLING OVER SOUL

Contributed by karu on Sunday, 21st April 2013 @ 04:39:46 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

your feeling landing on heart....,
rolling over soul,
thanks for giving me reason,
thanks for giving me a goal,
mind has many choice for lady love,
but love has chosen you for this role,
before i become someone's husband take me in
your control

your feeling landing on heart....,
rolling over soul,
let them come to me,
don't let them seize,
it is for me,
don't let them freeze,
i am not asking you to do anything,
but don't stop them please,
for health of my heart ,
it will work like a cheese

your feeling landing on heart....,
rolling over soul,
saying me she love you,
giving me a dream new,
whenever i ask about my second_heart,
it(feelings) says
she is playing her part,
thus why she is sending you her emotion on GOD'S cart,
each and every night,
through the dream made flight,

your feeling landing on heart....,
rolling over soul,
when my eyes try to go under wink,
and heart want to drink,
your sweet memory through the LOVE LINK,
under the star's blink ,
at the time when night started to sink
and what is going on,
mind can't even think

Copyright © karu ... [ 2013-04-21 04:39:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: LANDING ON HEART ROLLING OVER SOUL (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagefairy on Wednesday, 24th April 2013 @ 12:12:36 PM AEST
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Interesting write. (You snooze, you lose - :-) ) True it is hard to know whom God has chosen for us (or we chose before we got here). A heart working like cheese is an interesting metaphor.
Blessings, SF

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