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Unhinged
Contributed by
flex4life13
on
Friday, 19th April 2013 @ 06:33:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Sedately you sway to and fro
as an easterly wind decorticates sinful veins
Not intent in masking an over zealous glow
rather the purest of deference, nature, it cannot feign.
plural of you, is it we?
Desirous, I am in thinking so.
Gentle woman, inexorably you drown me in your sea
My thought, a facile reverie, transcribing not your formidable blow.
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Re: Unhinged
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sagefairy on
Friday, 19th April 2013 @ 07:54:13 PM AEST (User
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Nice use of vocabulary! I like it. Good luck and...
Blessings, SF |
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Re: Unhinged
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 07:32:45 PM AEST (User
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truly beautiful, very romantic:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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