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My heart won't stop racing
My eyes are being to tear up
My feet won't move

This time in my life is about to end
For everything around me
Is changing
In many unique ways
Some good some bad
Either way
Change is coming

I did all I could to
Beaten the odds
Faced my fears
Even made
A friend along the way

Everything is packed
My path is set
Even my flight is correct
This time

So now I must say
To all my friends
Thank you for everything and being there for me

As I walk out the door
I stop and look back
And smile a hug smile
And say
I did it I have done the impossible
And walk away
with my head held high and open arms
To welcome my new life
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New chapter

Contributed by PreciousKitten on Tuesday, 2nd April 2013 @ 02:56:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

My nerves are shot
My heart won't stop racing
My eyes are being to tear up
My feet won't move

This time in my life is about to end
For everything around me
Is changing
In many unique ways
Some good some bad
Either way
Change is coming

I did all I could to
Beaten the odds
Faced my fears
Even made
A friend along the way

Everything is packed
My path is set
Even my flight is correct
This time

So now I must say
To all my friends
Thank you for everything and being there for me

As I walk out the door
I stop and look back
And smile a hug smile
And say
I did it I have done the impossible
And walk away
with my head held high and open arms
To welcome my new life

Copyright © PreciousKitten ... [ 2013-04-02 14:56:17]
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Re: New chapter (User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on Wednesday, 3rd April 2013 @ 12:25:09 AM AEST
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Oh yeahh...that profound sentiment of inevitable transition,
takes much heart to overcome it,
and you've bravely done so.
I can definitely associate with that at this moment...

Great write!

Take care

-Ambivalence

Re: New chapter (User Rating: 1 )
by bigj on Wednesday, 3rd April 2013 @ 02:05:26 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, full of self worth and accomplishment. Loved reading this. Instilled hope.
Ya should read some of mine sometime and tell me what you think.

Re: New chapter (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 3rd April 2013 @ 06:03:22 AM AEST
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I can totally relate to this write.
Great job, kitten.
Blessings, huggs
emy

Re: New chapter (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 16th August 2013 @ 06:07:31 PM AEST
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It's been a long, hard week for me, everything felt a little negative until I read this.
It has been nice to draw the day to a close on a positive note.
Thanks!!!

Steve

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