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For you to even consider me
But your heart has been broken before
Yet so has mine...
Lets promise eachother we'll take it slow
One baby step at a time...
Give me your hand angel and you take mine
This can't be superficial this time
I can't take another one of these
Romance is just another way of ruining friendship
Maybe it will be different this time
But conceil my heart in your palm
And steal my lips with a heartfelt kiss
I'm ready this time...
My mind is in full effect on you [comments] => 5 [counter] => 291 [topic] => 2 [informant] => tbsbikescene [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection

Contributed by tbsbikescene on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Must have done something
For you to even consider me
But your heart has been broken before
Yet so has mine...
Lets promise eachother we'll take it slow
One baby step at a time...
Give me your hand angel and you take mine
This can't be superficial this time
I can't take another one of these
Romance is just another way of ruining friendship
Maybe it will be different this time
But conceil my heart in your palm
And steal my lips with a heartfelt kiss
I'm ready this time...
My mind is in full effect on you

Copyright © tbsbikescene ... [ 2003-05-14 17:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 12:11:31 AM AEST
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AAHH This was so sweet,everyone has a past & thats what it should stay a past! Good write! Christina

Re: Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 08:16:26 AM AEST
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This sent a shiver up my spine. It is beautiful and loving and yet cautious. Great piece of work.

sleepless_siren

Re: Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Tbsbikescene on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 10:42:53 PM AEST
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wow that means soo much to me that u enjoyed it...thank you
-cor

Re: Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Tbsbikescene on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 10:43:38 PM AEST
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Wow u don't know how much that means to me...thank you soo much
-cor

Re: Shine Your Love To Me and See The Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Apartment213 on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 11:25:43 PM AEST
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this was a great poem, intelligent i really dig this one
KENNY

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