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Array ( [sid] => 17561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => your touch keeps me on [time] => 2003-05-14 16:35:00 [hometext] => Lindsey i want to feel you...i love you...please coment everyone. [bodytext] => fairy tale
broken every bone
fairy tale
been waiting to get u alone

ur the ink all around my skin
i know five senses will keep me on
sweet soft and batty eyes
roll in ur magnificence, keeps me on
ur soft skin keeps me on earth
tonight is the night
been waiting to get u alone

fairy tale
broken every bone
fairy tale
been waiting to get u alone

the warmth inside u, keeps me on
the finger tips of an angel
draw heaven a little nearer
trembling voice in my soul, she keeps me on
her body made of stars and bright eyes
we'll never feel fear again

bodies mend
this higher level
i die for her skin
and the ink drops
in the shape of angel wings
the taste of sweet
in my head forever

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your touch keeps me on

Contributed by Apartment213 on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 04:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

fairy tale
broken every bone
fairy tale
been waiting to get u alone

ur the ink all around my skin
i know five senses will keep me on
sweet soft and batty eyes
roll in ur magnificence, keeps me on
ur soft skin keeps me on earth
tonight is the night
been waiting to get u alone

fairy tale
broken every bone
fairy tale
been waiting to get u alone

the warmth inside u, keeps me on
the finger tips of an angel
draw heaven a little nearer
trembling voice in my soul, she keeps me on
her body made of stars and bright eyes
we'll never feel fear again

bodies mend
this higher level
i die for her skin
and the ink drops
in the shape of angel wings
the taste of sweet
in my head forever

Copyright © Apartment213 ... [ 2003-05-14 16:35:00]
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Re: your touch keeps me on (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 04:58:24 PM AEST
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hmm looks like somebody's in love.
best to ya.
Nawtee

Re: your touch keeps me on (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 05:08:35 PM AEST
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this is beautiful...i love the imagery and the visual images you create. i wish you and lindsey all the best, i think you'll be really good for each other. keep writing, Kate x

Re: your touch keeps me on (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 07:17:30 PM AEST
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kenny, this is beautiful...i cant wait...:O) you are absolutely amazing....i love you.. "all i want is you..." Paint mongoose

Lindsey

Re: your touch keeps me on (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 01:24:41 AM AEST
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Beautifully written .. you have a great style. Best wishes to you both... Jan

Re: your touch keeps me on (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 03:05:12 PM AEST
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Very beautiful poem... i wish you the best... love can be a very splendid thing...
~Crystal~

Re: your touch keeps me on (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 12:53:35 AM AEST
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i don't see how broken bones fits within' a love poem;
"fairy tale
broken every bone"
but i do love this poem muchly, and it has a strong ending;
"i die for her skin
and the ink drops
in the shape of angel wings
the taste of sweet
in my head forever"
all very sweet, vivid lovely:)

Re: your touch keeps me on (User Rating: 1 )
by wazarov on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 02:20:06 AM AEST
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i see kenny that you have the creative combination of life, love and talent, you`ll never get lost in pain.

Re: your touch keeps me on (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Saturday, 17th May 2003 @ 05:06:08 AM AEST
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Good work and I hope your love will flourish! Keep up the good work pal! See ya around!

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