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Array ( [sid] => 175427 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => blotting. . . [time] => 2013-03-15 11:23:16 [hometext] => there is one more thing. . . [bodytext] =>
currently in the east. . .


I lie, anemic
surely, the poorest corpuscle. . .
I am forgetful of all of this, at your feet

meanwhile. . .

a sensitivity is under attack. . .

from somewhere deep inside
scarce words expand,
swelling their given pigment & stray
towards the approximate wave-length
range of 585-575 nano meters. . .
very uncomplimentary. . .

nearby. . .

perforated memories
punctuate inspirations of you
the blues,
surreal & tranquil. . . the left-overs of addiction
smooth jazz,
sans sultry syllables. . . some solemn slang-residue
alternative,
forsaken for now. . .
silence,
hmm. . . my old friend

from this odd distance. . .

we look like old lovers
silently dancing a taboo waltz
. . . evolving. . . on knees of apprehension
emphasis on close enough

deep inside. . .
I find myself. . . searching
for something less disturbing
to turn to

my love. . .
beauty . . . is a summer of coping
. . . of winding up mechanical smiles

beauty. . . is shutting down
. . . what lead us to love, dissolving

lust. . . is a half year ago. . . weeping from the weight of obsession
. . . obsessively

beauty. . . is erasure on my notorious calendar of distress
. . . is a tattoo of mercy on the sybaritical arm

beauty. . .is a test
. . . is a stunning grip on the bizarre in ineffectual color

lust. . . is a well. . . hero on the brink
of joy. . .disguised as a cult for self-preservation

lonely. . . is outside the lines of defense
. . .is the inside-out of ugly
. . . is the road less traveled

regret. . . is by passing gallery after sad gallery of minute, minuscule differences
that scream inferiority into the flesh. . .
into the sum & substance. . .
into the small veins and tight seams

what's left. . . is effortlessly mundane
& channels itself. . . if casually possessed
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blotting. . .

Contributed by elle on Friday, 15th March 2013 @ 11:23:16 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous




currently in the east. . .


I lie, anemic
surely, the poorest corpuscle. . .
I am forgetful of all of this, at your feet

meanwhile. . .

a sensitivity is under attack. . .

from somewhere deep inside
scarce words expand,
swelling their given pigment & stray
towards the approximate wave-length
range of 585-575 nano meters. . .
very uncomplimentary. . .

nearby. . .

perforated memories
punctuate inspirations of you
the blues,
surreal & tranquil. . . the left-overs of addiction
smooth jazz,
sans sultry syllables. . . some solemn slang-residue
alternative,
forsaken for now. . .
silence,
hmm. . . my old friend

from this odd distance. . .

we look like old lovers
silently dancing a taboo waltz
. . . evolving. . . on knees of apprehension
emphasis on close enough

deep inside. . .
I find myself. . . searching
for something less disturbing
to turn to

my love. . .
beauty . . . is a summer of coping
. . . of winding up mechanical smiles

beauty. . . is shutting down
. . . what lead us to love, dissolving

lust. . . is a half year ago. . . weeping from the weight of obsession
. . . obsessively

beauty. . . is erasure on my notorious calendar of distress
. . . is a tattoo of mercy on the sybaritical arm

beauty. . .is a test
. . . is a stunning grip on the bizarre in ineffectual color

lust. . . is a well. . . hero on the brink
of joy. . .disguised as a cult for self-preservation

lonely. . . is outside the lines of defense
. . .is the inside-out of ugly
. . . is the road less traveled

regret. . . is by passing gallery after sad gallery of minute, minuscule differences
that scream inferiority into the flesh. . .
into the sum & substance. . .
into the small veins and tight seams

what's left. . . is effortlessly mundane
& channels itself. . . if casually possessed




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Re: blotting. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Sunday, 14th April 2013 @ 10:16:15 PM AEST
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This is brilliant! I can't believe no one has noticed yet.'mechanical smiles, the inside out of ugly, and then...that scream inferiority into the flesh' I could go on and on. Love this!! ming


Re: blotting. . . (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 28th April 2014 @ 10:25:52 PM AEST
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beautifully written, your intellect shines through
as does your heart,

hugs n' love nessa





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