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Digging this hole, never feeling so low.
I fall to the truth of what's hidden inside.
Fear of judgement when asked to confide.
I drop to my knees and pray it will fade.
But in my mind all i see is the blade.
Is this the person i was meant to be?
I'm asking your guidance to find the real me. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 72 [informant] => chlois [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

Guidance

Contributed by chlois on Saturday, 2nd March 2013 @ 11:52:42 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

My mind is wandering with no where to go.
Digging this hole, never feeling so low.
I fall to the truth of what's hidden inside.
Fear of judgement when asked to confide.
I drop to my knees and pray it will fade.
But in my mind all i see is the blade.
Is this the person i was meant to be?
I'm asking your guidance to find the real me.

Copyright © chlois ... [ 2013-03-02 23:52:42]
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Re: Guidance (User Rating: 1 )
by jdawg on Monday, 9th September 2013 @ 11:33:49 PM AEST
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Sometimes we often find our selves trying an external pain to cover up the internal pain! But sadly that internal pain is still there, with only now physical markings to show we are hurting! Some of us do it to reach out in hopes someone will notice that we are fading away from ourselves! Truth be told we reach out for help but yet at the same time we refuse it! From reading your story's, (not poetry because what you right is stating a story with a rhyme) you sound to me like a beautiful soul that has lost touch with yourself! God made each one of us beautiful and special in our own unique way! Some have the perfect body or external features while others have the perfect heart and soul! But, that perfect body is nothing because what truly makes a person beautiful, is what we have to offer from our hearts! And it sounds to me you have an over flowing heart with lots of love and joy to offer, but self appearance issues (correct me if I'm wrong just going from what I've read!) I pray you can someday see your real beauty isn't what you look like, or your size, etc.. It's what you have in your heart, because the most beautiful person in the world will look ugly if they are not beautiful on the inside!! You have a deep dark truth and emotion behind your writing, and I salute you for having the guts and courage to be open a out it!! Continue writing and may god bless you with whatever you search for!

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