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[title] => Memories
[time] => 2013-03-01 16:37:53
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[bodytext] => Days go by one by one Those memories she enjoyed so Shall go by too She just does not know that yet For now it is all she can hold onto She denies She felt so special On top of the world She told you her secrets and dreams But then you told her the truth Breaking her heart She cries "The hardest part of this all is losing you" She whispers "What did I do?" You showed her that you moved on She tries to make you believe she did too She lies She knows she can not stop whatever lies ahead So she will continue living in her fantasy land Reliving those memories Trying to feel something Since you took that away from her too Inside She dies Now she dreams She can change what happened in the past Maybe things would have been different She knows it is impossible But still She tries
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Memories
Contributed by
AmazingFailure
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Friday, 1st March 2013 @ 04:37:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Days go by one by one Those memories she enjoyed so Shall go by too She just does not know that yet For now it is all she can hold onto She denies She felt so special On top of the world She told you her secrets and dreams But then you told her the truth Breaking her heart She cries "The hardest part of this all is losing you" She whispers "What did I do?" You showed her that you moved on She tries to make you believe she did too She lies She knows she can not stop whatever lies ahead So she will continue living in her fantasy land Reliving those memories Trying to feel something Since you took that away from her too Inside She dies Now she dreams She can change what happened in the past Maybe things would have been different She knows it is impossible But still She tries
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Re: Memories
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sagefairy on
Friday, 1st March 2013 @ 05:12:31 PM AEST (User
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Nice work! It happens to all of us... some of us more than once. Blessings, SF |
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Re: Memories
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kailas on
Friday, 1st March 2013 @ 06:55:55 PM AEST (User
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This is great I love your rhyming scheme. Keep on writing :) |
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Re: Memories
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd March 2013 @ 12:41:14 AM AEST (User
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I really like the way this was written...the perspective, perhaps. I'm sure most of us have been there.
Thank you for posting and to YPDC.
Tim |
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Re: Memories
(User Rating: 1 ) by Barron94 on
Thursday, 11th April 2013 @ 06:17:04 PM AEST (User
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what a beautifully written poem |
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