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Cries, ‘Daddy, why do my angels always die?'

Wisdom held her hands and gently kissed her

Tears, wiping away her frown with an eternal

Embrace as his voice resonated even now in her dotage

'Were they not there when you needed them?'

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Passing Through

Contributed by northernlights on Friday, 1st March 2013 @ 12:41:34 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



The voice of a child echoes in the valley as she

Cries, ‘Daddy, why do my angels always die?'

Wisdom held her hands and gently kissed her

Tears, wiping away her frown with an eternal

Embrace as his voice resonated even now in her dotage

'Were they not there when you needed them?'





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Re: Passing Through (User Rating: 1 )
by spud on Friday, 1st March 2013 @ 02:13:36 PM AEST
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Hi Anna,

Short, but sweet - and the message is in its
brevity.

Tommy




Re: Passing Through (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Friday, 1st March 2013 @ 02:59:13 PM AEST
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Thats pretty deep. i love it though
keep writing


Re: Passing Through (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd March 2013 @ 01:06:27 AM AEST
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This is truly beautiful!

God's angels are always with us.

I have thought that maybe even they're assigned to us...like in the movie Always and that last line sums that up...at least for me.

Thank you,

Tim



Re: Passing Through (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th March 2013 @ 06:06:32 AM AEST
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This is awesome - so much conveyed in just a few lines and so beautifully written!




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