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[aid] => mick
[title] => Noticeable Brick Wall
[time] => 2013-02-19 15:46:55
[hometext] => This is more than a brick wall though it is noticeable, how will you get to her. Taking it down? or getting over her wall to get inside and know every bit of her, to love her for who she really is.
[bodytext] => Noticeable Brick Wall I could see your beauty at first sight I knew, it was way beyond average so natural, so true. I knew you were neglected never told how much you mean. Unfortunately you have felt as if you have never been seen. Compliments nervous you, I can hear it in your voice. Your past is your past and your choice is your choice. This brick wall you’ve built up is strong by can be taken down. If the right person starts from the top brick by brick to find the ground. Don’t move too fast precision and patience are key. The bricks themselves are fragile because its been mistreated I can see. The way these bricks have been layed unseeingly cannot be taken back, but the future pattern that you choose can change the future of how they stack. All of these things are noticeable but not everyone’s eye can see, that if you weren't worth the time your time is worth everything to me. Unusually harder to read, these bricks begin to unfold slowly, but surely, your past is beginning to be told. As trusting and strong the wall may seem bricks can only withstand so much. Just when you think it’s at its strongest it can be broken with just a touch. So when these bricks are ready enough to break away from this wall I will be here to comfort, hold, and listen but most importantly catch you, when you fall. -Joseph Matthew Sawyer Jr. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 91 [topic] => 2 [informant] => jms957 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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