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Array ( [sid] => 174929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Formal Goodbye [time] => 2013-01-27 06:48:13 [hometext] => Something I wrote for a friend, who's also a coworker, that will be leaving soon. Some once a hoped partner that failed in the end. Wanted to show her, but don't know yet. [bodytext] => Delicate as people are
Yet hardened from life
Living and exploring
Throwing caution to the wind

Getting lost within struggles
But always finding home
A pretty soul
With a pretty face

Hiding pain I'll never know
I hope someday my mind will grow
To gain the strength of compassion
To make one day better

Promote her joy
So she knows it not as myth
Go beyond normality
To offer a glimpse of fantasy

She leaves now soon
To experience another quest
I wish her luck on her journey
And the cure to her unrest [comments] => 2 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 52 [informant] => xHeathenx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

A Formal Goodbye

Contributed by xHeathenx on Sunday, 27th January 2013 @ 06:48:13 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Delicate as people are
Yet hardened from life
Living and exploring
Throwing caution to the wind

Getting lost within struggles
But always finding home
A pretty soul
With a pretty face

Hiding pain I'll never know
I hope someday my mind will grow
To gain the strength of compassion
To make one day better

Promote her joy
So she knows it not as myth
Go beyond normality
To offer a glimpse of fantasy

She leaves now soon
To experience another quest
I wish her luck on her journey
And the cure to her unrest

Copyright © xHeathenx ... [ 2013-01-27 06:48:13]
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Re: A Formal Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 8th May 2014 @ 05:04:53 PM AEST
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lovely! i hope you gave it to her...

hugs n' love nessa

Re: A Formal Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 13th February 2015 @ 02:26:14 PM AEST
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you leave me breathless with all that you say
yesterday,
all my troubles seemed so far away
have you seen eyes wide shut anyway?
I love how you write

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