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Array ( [sid] => 174876 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BURDENS ON A SHELF [time] => 2013-01-22 02:38:43 [hometext] => Written 8/04/2012 [bodytext] => Father God,
You catch me before I fall
You provide all my needs
When life pounds depression on me
You come to me in great speed.

Father God, so sweet and strong
I'm laying my burdens on your shelf
Take them all, lead your way
You're my rock when
I loose myself

When we are heavy hear-ted, in pain
Missed loved ones come to mind
Your loving arms wrap around us
You assure us we'll see them in time.

Your love shines to heights unknown
You lift us above Earth's plane.
Your greatness rocks our souls
In your love we shall remain. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 461 [topic] => 19 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

BURDENS ON A SHELF

Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, 22nd January 2013 @ 02:38:43 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Father God,
You catch me before I fall
You provide all my needs
When life pounds depression on me
You come to me in great speed.

Father God, so sweet and strong
I'm laying my burdens on your shelf
Take them all, lead your way
You're my rock when
I loose myself

When we are heavy hear-ted, in pain
Missed loved ones come to mind
Your loving arms wrap around us
You assure us we'll see them in time.

Your love shines to heights unknown
You lift us above Earth's plane.
Your greatness rocks our souls
In your love we shall remain.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2013-01-22 02:38:43]
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Re: BURDENS ON A SHELF (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd January 2013 @ 08:54:56 AM AEST
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Impressive, You traveled to the future, wrote a poem, came back and then posted it here! You rock!

Your poem has a very smooth flow and great rhyme scheme. I wish I could be as positive as you. He knows my thoughts and knows that sometimes I feel like I'm being punished for something I did. But I'm sure it's some kind of plan. Just don't know what it is yet.

Thanks for posting.

Tim

Re: BURDENS ON A SHELF (User Rating: 1 )
by NightMareShoGun on Tuesday, 22nd January 2013 @ 12:22:22 PM AEST
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emystar outstanding job i love it

Re: BURDENS ON A SHELF (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Wednesday, 23rd January 2013 @ 03:57:38 PM AEST
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wow! you are one gifted soul.
i just love your poetry.
so real and heart felt.
continue to shine bright like the star you are.
helping othere to see in the dark.

Re: BURDENS ON A SHELF (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 25th January 2013 @ 01:23:54 AM AEST
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such inspiration I get while reading this beauty you shared with us with your talent,faith and great love.I loves ya girl

hugssss
Michelle

Re: BURDENS ON A SHELF (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Friday, 25th January 2013 @ 09:28:46 PM AEST
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Theirs no greater than the love from GOD,beautifully written emy

Re: BURDENS ON A SHELF (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenShards on Thursday, 28th February 2013 @ 08:38:31 PM AEST
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Wonderful last paragraph. Really touches the reader. It takes raw talent to pull off a spiritual poem.

Re: BURDENS ON A SHELF (User Rating: 1 )
by devils_denial on Saturday, 9th March 2013 @ 04:40:12 PM AEST
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great poem emy...loving your rhyme style and the message within the poem comes across well...good job

D.D

Re: BURDENS ON A SHELF (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 13th March 2013 @ 03:38:24 PM AEST
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you have written a prayer for me to carry in my heart...to bring me peace and knowingness that the universe is God and God is universe...so be it.Poetry is just a prayer from within....and your poetry shall be my prayer...My thanks ND.

Re: BURDENS ON A SHELF (User Rating: 1 )
by desciple on Sunday, 3rd August 2014 @ 01:06:25 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this write, thankful for the blessing that god gives us. amazing...keep sharing

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