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[sid] => 174826
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Marry me
[time] => 2013-01-16 23:36:46
[hometext] => This is my first poem ever. Please tell me what you think. I am gonna use it to ask my girlfriend to marry me.
[bodytext] => From the first day I saw your beautiful face
I knew I had to sit and wait
Untill I found the perfect time
And the courage to make you mine
Then we had that special night
I knew that I must be right
I couldn't find the words to say
To tell you how I always prayed
To find a woman as good as you
Now my dreams have all come true
And it's all because of you
I look into your eyes
And I still get mesmerized
Everything that has come and gone
Your the only thing that I can rely on
The only thing that's steady and true
I am so madly in love with you
Theres one thing left to do
And it has to do with you
As you sit and read this poem
I've had a plan all along
Turn around and then you will see
How much you really mean to me
[comments] => 4
[counter] => 206
[topic] => 2
[informant] => wdhughes
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[ratings] => 0
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Marry me
Contributed by
wdhughes
on
Wednesday, 16th January 2013 @ 11:36:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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From the first day I saw your beautiful face
I knew I had to sit and wait
Untill I found the perfect time
And the courage to make you mine
Then we had that special night
I knew that I must be right
I couldn't find the words to say
To tell you how I always prayed
To find a woman as good as you
Now my dreams have all come true
And it's all because of you
I look into your eyes
And I still get mesmerized
Everything that has come and gone
Your the only thing that I can rely on
The only thing that's steady and true
I am so madly in love with you
Theres one thing left to do
And it has to do with you
As you sit and read this poem
I've had a plan all along
Turn around and then you will see
How much you really mean to me
Copyright ©
wdhughes
... [
2013-01-16 23:36:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Marry me
(User Rating: 1 ) by ScarlettDrawl on
Thursday, 17th January 2013 @ 12:24:22 AM AEST (User
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Awe... Very sweet. Keep the tissues near by..I'm sure she'll need um. Congratulations in advance.
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Re: Marry me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Banjosandwitch on
Thursday, 17th January 2013 @ 08:54:48 AM AEST (User
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Hope all goes as well as your XLNT first poem |
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Re: Marry me
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 17th January 2013 @ 12:25:03 PM AEST (User
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Keep writing, you're a natural.
This write will melt her.
Blessings, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Marry me
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Monday, 27th May 2013 @ 12:12:42 AM AEST (User
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How could she resist such sincerity?
May your life with her bring you volumes of moments to inspire more lovely words! |
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