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Array ( [sid] => 174825 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Man uncertain [time] => 2013-01-16 22:24:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The man suffered for the result of his errors
For his mistakes, lost beneath his senses,
Undetermined, unaware for the choices he took
From the past. He is deceived by a woman who had an evil agenda
To get what she want. She drowned and abused the man while
She is having affairs with the different men.
She took everything and abandoned the man and gone.

The man being alone, broken and damaged inflicted
By the evil woman. Lost in the shadow of his own self,
Uncertain, unfixed, disturbed being a man.

A long the way, time passed… life surprises appeared,
The flower bloomed brought him beauty to
Enjoy, to embrace.

He discovered himself in the arms of a wonderful creation
Of God, being together in the unity of love, each new
Day brings joy, so beautiful, so inspiring to him.

The man still wondered with fear. The woman is determined
To show the meaning of love, and the miracle behind it.

The evidence of miracle suddenly growth to the womb
Of a woman. He still unaware to see his existence to
The face of the child.

He is thinking, whispering, wondering… I hope he will stand up with the
Strong determination because, this is his journey of a lifetime
Experience to be happy and complete.

“ We human being living in this universe had a lots
Of opportunity to choose our destiny. We create
Mistakes for our choices and actions, for our foolishness
And carelessness. But even though we commit
Mistakes and errors, it becomes our lesson
For us to be aware, to be awaken, to be strong,
To be careful to our choices and actions in life,
Life must go on. ”

© Jocelyn Dunbar
14th of Jan. 2013
3:45 P.M.
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The Man uncertain

Contributed by jocelyn on Wednesday, 16th January 2013 @ 10:24:04 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

The man suffered for the result of his errors
For his mistakes, lost beneath his senses,
Undetermined, unaware for the choices he took
From the past. He is deceived by a woman who had an evil agenda
To get what she want. She drowned and abused the man while
She is having affairs with the different men.
She took everything and abandoned the man and gone.

The man being alone, broken and damaged inflicted
By the evil woman. Lost in the shadow of his own self,
Uncertain, unfixed, disturbed being a man.

A long the way, time passed… life surprises appeared,
The flower bloomed brought him beauty to
Enjoy, to embrace.

He discovered himself in the arms of a wonderful creation
Of God, being together in the unity of love, each new
Day brings joy, so beautiful, so inspiring to him.

The man still wondered with fear. The woman is determined
To show the meaning of love, and the miracle behind it.

The evidence of miracle suddenly growth to the womb
Of a woman. He still unaware to see his existence to
The face of the child.

He is thinking, whispering, wondering… I hope he will stand up with the
Strong determination because, this is his journey of a lifetime
Experience to be happy and complete.

“ We human being living in this universe had a lots
Of opportunity to choose our destiny. We create
Mistakes for our choices and actions, for our foolishness
And carelessness. But even though we commit
Mistakes and errors, it becomes our lesson
For us to be aware, to be awaken, to be strong,
To be careful to our choices and actions in life,
Life must go on. ”

© Jocelyn Dunbar
14th of Jan. 2013
3:45 P.M.

Copyright Â© jocelyn ... [ 2013-01-16 22:24:04]
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