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Heart and soul
Hand in hand
Together we’d walk
Through the sand

Together we’d find
That secret place
I long to feel
Its warm embrace

Together we’d walk
On red and black roses
That formed the path
Together we’ve chosen

The path to the world
Kept safe in our mind
Of love and happiness
No man could find

Love is pure
Love is grand
Together we’d walk
As I took your hand

When the day is young
And the sky turns blue
I turn to see
The image of you

When cold in the night
You kept me warm
When time brought me down
You held me in your arms

I took for granted
Everything you did
I never once thought
It would come to this

I treated you bad
Through anger and stress
I should have realized
I created a mess

Now I’m alone
But I’m not letting go
I’m sorry for everything
That I did to you

I was wrong, I was stupid
And words will never say
How much I regret it
Every single day

Together we were pure
Together we were grand
I am forever sorry
Please let me hold your hand

I will change, I would die
Start it over again
To show I can do better
Then what I have been

I just want to be the man
That you fell in love with
I just want to be the one
That you want to be with

Please take me back
And I’ll show my words true
Because all I want to do
Is show you I love you

I want to be with you
For now and forever
So please baby say
Forever together
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Together

Contributed by DoubleS on Monday, 14th January 2013 @ 11:02:26 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

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Heart and soul
Hand in hand
Together we’d walk
Through the sand

Together we’d find
That secret place
I long to feel
Its warm embrace

Together we’d walk
On red and black roses
That formed the path
Together we’ve chosen

The path to the world
Kept safe in our mind
Of love and happiness
No man could find

Love is pure
Love is grand
Together we’d walk
As I took your hand

When the day is young
And the sky turns blue
I turn to see
The image of you

When cold in the night
You kept me warm
When time brought me down
You held me in your arms

I took for granted
Everything you did
I never once thought
It would come to this

I treated you bad
Through anger and stress
I should have realized
I created a mess

Now I’m alone
But I’m not letting go
I’m sorry for everything
That I did to you

I was wrong, I was stupid
And words will never say
How much I regret it
Every single day

Together we were pure
Together we were grand
I am forever sorry
Please let me hold your hand

I will change, I would die
Start it over again
To show I can do better
Then what I have been

I just want to be the man
That you fell in love with
I just want to be the one
That you want to be with

Please take me back
And I’ll show my words true
Because all I want to do
Is show you I love you

I want to be with you
For now and forever
So please baby say
Forever together

Copyright Â© DoubleS ... [ 2013-01-14 23:02:26]
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Re: Together (User Rating: 1 )
by Whiskurz on Tuesday, 15th January 2013 @ 12:02:35 PM AEST
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Well written my friend.....I hope it gets you back together......Whisk

Re: Together (User Rating: 1 )
by dvtpdw on Tuesday, 15th January 2013 @ 01:52:59 PM AEST
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With this, you have put your heart out there clearly with hope, for her to see. You have written a write of promise - I hope you both get to fulfill the future within your words. Very nice write. Thank you for sharing, P

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