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to not give a care in the world
I'd like to see children play
to not see violence erupt
I'd like for the world to be still for just one second
to enjoy what's around us
to see that the world has meaning
with or without something
I'd like to see the girl who's heart is breaking
to find love again
to have hope in something beautiful
the world is like a flower
we water it with purpose
but we kill it with too much [comments] => 4 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SATANIC_NIGGA [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The World

Contributed by SATANIC_NIGGA on Monday, 14th January 2013 @ 04:46:25 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I'd like to hear the trickling of rain against my window
to not give a care in the world
I'd like to see children play
to not see violence erupt
I'd like for the world to be still for just one second
to enjoy what's around us
to see that the world has meaning
with or without something
I'd like to see the girl who's heart is breaking
to find love again
to have hope in something beautiful
the world is like a flower
we water it with purpose
but we kill it with too much

Copyright © SATANIC_NIGGA ... [ 2013-01-14 16:46:25]
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Re: The World (User Rating: 1 )
by Mick_Puttock on Monday, 14th January 2013 @ 10:12:10 PM AEST
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Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com.
I enjoyed this poem, hopefully many more to come....

Re: The World (User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on Tuesday, 15th January 2013 @ 01:11:03 PM AEST
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Truly profound... I love the fact
that this passage is so sincere and filled
with both hope and sorrow.
More important than the afore mentioned is
the stark truthfulness.
The title could'nt be more appropriate....
Simply beautiful.

-UNORTHODOX

Re: The World (User Rating: 1 )
by workinprogress on Tuesday, 15th January 2013 @ 08:36:17 PM AEST
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great poem! i love your insight and truthfulness...we can kill it with too much, for sure. thanks for sharing it!

Re: The World (User Rating: 1 )
by enigma on Wednesday, 16th January 2013 @ 08:05:48 PM AEST
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Hi, "Satanic Nigga"

Awesome...awesome...awesome...awesome...Me, too! I am sixty-one years old and it took me half of my life to figure out that our world-wide society is in-side-out, backwards, and up-side-down! That when society said, "Love," it really meant, "Hate;" that when our society said, "Success," it really meant, "Failure!" That when society said, "Angels," it really meant, "Demons!" That when society said, "God," it really meant, "Satan!" You have already realized this and I would hazard a guess that you are at least half the age I am! When you say, "Satanic," I hear "God." When you say, "Nigga," I hear, "Idealized Perfection." Yes, I am a "Dreamer." I always have been. From my earliest years I somehow sensed that this world was unimaginably screwed up. You are on the right track. Be careful of linguistic semantics. KNOW what your spirit is saying. In reality, your handle is, "God's Idealized Perfection," and not, "Satanic Nigga..."

Don't dream...KNOW...

Blessings,

enigma...ron

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