Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 13:59:35 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 174803 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Devils Game [time] => 2013-01-14 06:06:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You can leave me forever, to wait
But at some stage it will always be too late
And as the sun sets so will the rope
Because as the last rays die, so does my hope
And the emotion that's been hidden inside you, ripping you apart
Combined with the pain of a shattered heart
Explodes from you
Now your sitting and shaking, black and blue
The bruises cover you
Blood running down your arms and your face
Start to realise that this world is a ***** up place
Begging to god, praying that for you he will open his doors
Because your so sick of these inner wars
Now your falling, hitting the ground hard
Looking for something, someone
Anything, anyone
Because you just want some help,
Someone to understand and tell you it'll all be okay
The one that will give you a reason to stay
I hold out my hands desperate to hold on
But there's nothing there,
Except more air
And as the blackness looms,
I can feel in my chest, my heart finally tear
Who what when where
When we get there Who will be there
But then my mind clears
All the hate and pain and remorse from all the years
As the blood spurts from skin and adrenalin kicks in
It time to forget all past and sin
This is it, I'm with the light
It's the end of the road, the last fight
Look down at my arms but my scars do not lie on me anymore
And the aching in my chest is no longer sore
Now the lights getting to bright
It's obscuring my sight
And there's eyes, and teeth, and a voice in my head
'Excusing me sir, don't sit up to fast from the bed'
And as my vision clears, and I see the needles, the doctors and the machines
The pain washes back over me, surging through my being
And I was brought face to face with the dark I'd been fleeing
Forced to fight in for another day
In this devils game I'm made to play

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Damian [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The Devils Game

Contributed by Damian on Monday, 14th January 2013 @ 06:06:19 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



You can leave me forever, to wait
But at some stage it will always be too late
And as the sun sets so will the rope
Because as the last rays die, so does my hope
And the emotion that's been hidden inside you, ripping you apart
Combined with the pain of a shattered heart
Explodes from you
Now your sitting and shaking, black and blue
The bruises cover you
Blood running down your arms and your face
Start to realise that this world is a ***** up place
Begging to god, praying that for you he will open his doors
Because your so sick of these inner wars
Now your falling, hitting the ground hard
Looking for something, someone
Anything, anyone
Because you just want some help,
Someone to understand and tell you it'll all be okay
The one that will give you a reason to stay
I hold out my hands desperate to hold on
But there's nothing there,
Except more air
And as the blackness looms,
I can feel in my chest, my heart finally tear
Who what when where
When we get there Who will be there
But then my mind clears
All the hate and pain and remorse from all the years
As the blood spurts from skin and adrenalin kicks in
It time to forget all past and sin
This is it, I'm with the light
It's the end of the road, the last fight
Look down at my arms but my scars do not lie on me anymore
And the aching in my chest is no longer sore
Now the lights getting to bright
It's obscuring my sight
And there's eyes, and teeth, and a voice in my head
'Excusing me sir, don't sit up to fast from the bed'
And as my vision clears, and I see the needles, the doctors and the machines
The pain washes back over me, surging through my being
And I was brought face to face with the dark I'd been fleeing
Forced to fight in for another day
In this devils game I'm made to play





Copyright © Damian ... [ 2013-01-14 06:06:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: The Devils Game (User Rating: 1 )
by LauranHyde on Wednesday, 20th February 2013 @ 06:35:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
thats actually so well written... you scare me boy. i legit wait for the day i see rip on your wall.
i love you...




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com