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Array ( [sid] => 174787 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I don't get it [time] => 2013-01-11 09:48:35 [hometext] => I can't take it much anymore.. [bodytext] => Lonely nights,
Empty phone,
Broken heart.
I never thought a year ago this would happen to me.
I promised myself that I would be the one.
What happen to us?
I didn't change for you,
I just don't get it,
I just wanted to be loved by you,
Because I loved you.
You gave me a chance to live ,
And then you gave it up for another dude's happiness.
I just don't get it,
I wanted to be the one to wake up every morning,
And tell you that I love you beautiful.
I was yours,
And you were mine.
I don't get it,
What did I do wrong?
Was I ugly?
Did I just say the wrong things?
I don't want anything better than you,
Because you are the best thing to me.
I don't care about what anybody says about you,
I will always love you,
Until my heart stops.
You may have chose him,
But you were my number 1 choice.
I don't get it,
You left me,
By myself,
In this darkness.
When I needed you,
And now I think I'm lost here forever.
I don't get it,
You going to be with him,
Makes my heart say it feels wrong.
You want to make him happy,
But what about me..?
I thought I was your one in six billion,
Your knight and shining armor,
The one that you loved.
Did you pity me?
Was I weak?
Was I just that ***** up?
Please tell me,
Why?
I can't deal with myself,
I thought love was loving someone through all their flaws.
I was and still am in love with you.
I don't care if it kills me,
I told you,
That I will always love you..
Even if you didn't love me.
I honestly can't deal with my pain,
I'm about to cut myself in million pieces.
I can't handle it much longer.
You are my life and soul,
But without you I'm nothing.
Honestly,
I wanted to marry you,
Have kids with you,
Have a life together.
I wish I had what he had,
I wish I had the most beautiful girl in the world.
But I guess that will never be my true ending.
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I don't get it

Contributed by jordanarce17 on Friday, 11th January 2013 @ 09:48:35 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Lonely nights,
Empty phone,
Broken heart.
I never thought a year ago this would happen to me.
I promised myself that I would be the one.
What happen to us?
I didn't change for you,
I just don't get it,
I just wanted to be loved by you,
Because I loved you.
You gave me a chance to live ,
And then you gave it up for another dude's happiness.
I just don't get it,
I wanted to be the one to wake up every morning,
And tell you that I love you beautiful.
I was yours,
And you were mine.
I don't get it,
What did I do wrong?
Was I ugly?
Did I just say the wrong things?
I don't want anything better than you,
Because you are the best thing to me.
I don't care about what anybody says about you,
I will always love you,
Until my heart stops.
You may have chose him,
But you were my number 1 choice.
I don't get it,
You left me,
By myself,
In this darkness.
When I needed you,
And now I think I'm lost here forever.
I don't get it,
You going to be with him,
Makes my heart say it feels wrong.
You want to make him happy,
But what about me..?
I thought I was your one in six billion,
Your knight and shining armor,
The one that you loved.
Did you pity me?
Was I weak?
Was I just that ***** up?
Please tell me,
Why?
I can't deal with myself,
I thought love was loving someone through all their flaws.
I was and still am in love with you.
I don't care if it kills me,
I told you,
That I will always love you..
Even if you didn't love me.
I honestly can't deal with my pain,
I'm about to cut myself in million pieces.
I can't handle it much longer.
You are my life and soul,
But without you I'm nothing.
Honestly,
I wanted to marry you,
Have kids with you,
Have a life together.
I wish I had what he had,
I wish I had the most beautiful girl in the world.
But I guess that will never be my true ending.




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Re: I don't get it (User Rating: 1 )
by NightMareShoGun on Friday, 11th January 2013 @ 11:47:24 AM AEST
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you did a great job


Re: I don't get it (User Rating: 1 )
by thistle_and_fern on Saturday, 12th January 2013 @ 12:44:32 AM AEST
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Raw emotions of hurt thst feels like it will never end - yes you did a good job or letting that hurt sohow for us to feel it too


Re: I don't get it (User Rating: 1 )
by BellaSpirit on Tuesday, 22nd January 2013 @ 01:11:25 AM AEST
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Long poems are so me ;)
i like this you did a great job .




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