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Array ( [sid] => 174780 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Yet Another Fight Between Me And My Mom [time] => 2013-01-09 21:36:40 [hometext] => This is just a poem i wrote, like i do on paper after every fight i have with my mom. I am only 14 so i don't expect to be good, but hopefully decent. Also i do not know much about the separation of stanzas but I'll try anyway [bodytext] => Just as I thought it was over and done,
she started to talk more, and i knew this was not going to be fun.
She screamed and howled with words of hate,
but there is only so much i can take, so i yelled out "WAIT!"
"Why do you say things like you have raised me wrong?"
"It's not my fault, you have made your list too long!"
"You ask too much of me, I'm only fourteen,"
"yet you ask me to cook dinner, and clean places I have never seen."
"I know I'm not a young child, but nor am I an adult,"
"but to ask me to do such things, I will take as an insult."

So now she is walking, up to her date book,
and she now yells for me to come. and take a good look.
I look at what she wrote and I feel confused,
for her parental powers, she has now abused.
She now wants me to do everything, in this here house,
and she will now keep track, and watch me as if she is a cat and I a mouse.
She is almost done now, but she is still steaming,
and even after it's all done, I still feel like screaming.
But instead I keep calm and whisper under my breath,
"All your hateful words have struck my heart as hard as the pain of death." [comments] => 3 [counter] => 129 [topic] => 21 [informant] => matt1159 [notes] => Spelling corrected per request, If further editing is needed, please click here Thank you. ~ Moderator_18 Jan 9, 2013 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Yet Another Fight Between Me And My Mom

Contributed by matt1159 on Wednesday, 9th January 2013 @ 09:36:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Just as I thought it was over and done,
she started to talk more, and i knew this was not going to be fun.
She screamed and howled with words of hate,
but there is only so much i can take, so i yelled out "WAIT!"
"Why do you say things like you have raised me wrong?"
"It's not my fault, you have made your list too long!"
"You ask too much of me, I'm only fourteen,"
"yet you ask me to cook dinner, and clean places I have never seen."
"I know I'm not a young child, but nor am I an adult,"
"but to ask me to do such things, I will take as an insult."

So now she is walking, up to her date book,
and she now yells for me to come. and take a good look.
I look at what she wrote and I feel confused,
for her parental powers, she has now abused.
She now wants me to do everything, in this here house,
and she will now keep track, and watch me as if she is a cat and I a mouse.
She is almost done now, but she is still steaming,
and even after it's all done, I still feel like screaming.
But instead I keep calm and whisper under my breath,
"All your hateful words have struck my heart as hard as the pain of death."




Copyright © matt1159 ... [ 2013-01-09 21:36:40]
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Re: Yet Another Fight Between Me And My Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 9th January 2013 @ 09:44:18 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
This is so sad but great writing.
Blessings,
emy


Re: Yet Another Fight Between Me And My Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Kailas on Friday, 11th January 2013 @ 10:44:51 PM AEST
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This is sad but written very well, thanks for sharing :)


Re: Yet Another Fight Between Me And My Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 16th January 2013 @ 09:54:13 PM AEST
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I wont give you advice about family relations as Im now 44 and cannot get anything right with my own....LOL but this is well written, and writing is indeed a good outlet for whatever the emotion so keep right on writing.
Welcome to ypdc:)

Michelle




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