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[aid] => mick
[title] => As I Watch From Space
[time] => 2013-01-09 19:21:28
[hometext] => This is my first poem. I don't know much about poetry so feel free to be super critical. Thanks.
[bodytext] => As I watch from space A smile on my face It was the greatest work of art But what have I built I’m overcome with guilt I should have known right from the start It’s the fault of mankind With their twisted minds And the hatred that lies in their heart As I look all around It’s all falling down They are tearing my world apart Power praised and evil paid Status based on money made Good for bad a common trade The poor and weak are without aid Priests and politicians lie Animals and people die The rules are set: An eye for an eye I let them live but wonder why They steal from their brother And cheat one another I pity all of humanity Yet they call themselves good Which he said they would How can they live in such vanity Sin a profession One quick confession And they call it Christianity They live in such grief I’m in disbelief They’ve reached absolute insanity The humans fell Straight into madness Forever alone I watched in sadness I spoke quite clear “Don’t touch the tree” But they ate the fruit They all ignored me And so I must End the lives of all A smile on my face As I watch them fall Feel my wrath As I cast this spell I declare Armageddon And end this hell (8th January 2013) [comments] => 0 [counter] => 71 [topic] => 31 [informant] => SephDent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
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