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Array ( [sid] => 174758 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Day the Sun Died [time] => 2013-01-08 08:49:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It struck me
As the sun set.
The eldest man I knew
Paid his way to the high city;
A world anew.

The darkness
Overwhelmed my being.
The sky shifted
From baby blue to gloomy.
His spirit has been lifted.

It was a dim night.
I watched as my father
Cried out in agony.
I once heard him yell
"Lord, why not take me?!"

I shall not forget
The day the sun died.
My vision of a wise man;
My smiling
Father of grand.

We have come to inner peace.
The darkest night is just before dawn;
Do not sit in grief and sorrow.
Have no fear,
Because the sun will rise tomorrow.
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The Day the Sun Died

Contributed by snc54 on Tuesday, 8th January 2013 @ 08:49:37 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

It struck me
As the sun set.
The eldest man I knew
Paid his way to the high city;
A world anew.

The darkness
Overwhelmed my being.
The sky shifted
From baby blue to gloomy.
His spirit has been lifted.

It was a dim night.
I watched as my father
Cried out in agony.
I once heard him yell
"Lord, why not take me?!"

I shall not forget
The day the sun died.
My vision of a wise man;
My smiling
Father of grand.

We have come to inner peace.
The darkest night is just before dawn;
Do not sit in grief and sorrow.
Have no fear,
Because the sun will rise tomorrow.

Copyright © snc54 ... [ 2013-01-08 08:49:37]
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Re: The Day the Sun Died (User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on Tuesday, 8th January 2013 @ 09:17:49 AM AEST
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loved it made me cry

Re: The Day the Sun Died (User Rating: 1 )
by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on Tuesday, 8th January 2013 @ 07:34:21 PM AEST
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this poem is full with emotion
.one can tell its from the heart.
excellent write.

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