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Array ( [sid] => 174746 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Kiss the Slave [time] => 2013-01-07 07:58:46 [hometext] => A poem to remember that often love doesn't last, but also to remind me that sometimes it does. [bodytext] => A tear of wicked sorrow grows,
to paint my heart within its throes,

a thorn to press upon the skin,
come watch as all my blood runs thin,

a trickle born of sunken hope,
where lies caress forgotten foes,

to drop within a shadow's grasp,
a light that was not meant to last,

so soft... a kiss... upon this slave,
I dream of love... until the grave. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 22 [informant] => deusdeira [notes] => Spelling corrected per request ~ Moderator_18 Jan 7, 2013 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Kiss the Slave

Contributed by deusdeira on Monday, 7th January 2013 @ 07:58:46 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A tear of wicked sorrow grows,
to paint my heart within its throes,

a thorn to press upon the skin,
come watch as all my blood runs thin,

a trickle born of sunken hope,
where lies caress forgotten foes,

to drop within a shadow's grasp,
a light that was not meant to last,

so soft... a kiss... upon this slave,
I dream of love... until the grave.

Copyright © deusdeira ... [ 2013-01-07 07:58:46]
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Re: Kiss the Slave (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th January 2013 @ 09:56:15 AM AEST
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I wish I had written this. So perfectly said!

Sadly seems everything has an expiration date. Really shouldn't be that way but that's the way it is.

Great poem.

Tim

Re: Kiss the Slave (User Rating: 1 )
by Sasha on Sunday, 13th January 2013 @ 09:59:52 AM AEST
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Sad but true...and very beautifully written...

Re: Kiss the Slave (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Wednesday, 30th January 2013 @ 07:02:16 AM AEST
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I feel there's a message here, but it's not quite coming to me right away. I'm liking the idea of the tear painting the heart, and I like the last two lines, because they make me think of the book I'm currently reading, "1984" by George Orwell.

Re: Kiss the Slave (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 7th July 2014 @ 09:37:50 PM AEST
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absolutely beautifully penned, exquisite:)

hugs n' love nessa

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