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The world

Has created a retarted artist

Getting the reaction

Like when fire was invented

Lets get this party started

A big bang

Like the wreckage from a head on collision

75 on the freeway

45 in the air

As I bust through the shield

No time for cars to yield

Last chance at life

So I back flip

And where my head was my feet hit

A pole

Now I stroll like a mean pimp

Eating gumbo shrimp

Wined and dined

Shining in lavish garments

A rebellious, A melodius

A rightousous one

Leading the exodus

Clearing all wretchedness

Crossing seas on feet

Lacking sleep

Herding sheep.
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The One

Contributed by euphoema on Monday, 31st December 2012 @ 07:22:53 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

Ahhh ish see what they done started

The world

Has created a retarted artist

Getting the reaction

Like when fire was invented

Lets get this party started

A big bang

Like the wreckage from a head on collision

75 on the freeway

45 in the air

As I bust through the shield

No time for cars to yield

Last chance at life

So I back flip

And where my head was my feet hit

A pole

Now I stroll like a mean pimp

Eating gumbo shrimp

Wined and dined

Shining in lavish garments

A rebellious, A melodius

A rightousous one

Leading the exodus

Clearing all wretchedness

Crossing seas on feet

Lacking sleep

Herding sheep.

Copyright © euphoema ... [ 2012-12-31 19:22:53]
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Re: The One (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 3rd February 2013 @ 01:54:43 PM AEST
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Wwow, really good stuff.
I see what cha mean.
I like it all but I really like.
The last two lines gave me a chuckle.
Blessings,
great work,
emy

Re: The One (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Wednesday, 7th August 2013 @ 07:03:11 PM AEST
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lacking sleep, i take as awakened
eyes wide open,
guiding sheep
like a shepherd
like jesus
guiding the still blind
those with eyes still shut
catatonic
unspiritual
asleep,,
distainfull assumptions
views perspectives
negative evaluations
interpretations
one aspect of many
many combined reflects more accurate truths
derived from all actualities events possibilities
synchronistically displayed, enacted imagined portrayed, ying and yang
quantum entanglement
two sides of a coin
both of the same
of the one,,,
when all angles are recogocnised
as one and the same
no right or wrong
evil or good
pureness is found
and all is equal
all is one.

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