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Array ( [sid] => 174574 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I NEED you [time] => 2012-12-21 03:08:39 [hometext] => {Another original from me (Kelseigh). I'm glad you all enjoy my poetry. I want to become a poet, but right now, I am currently 14 and still in school. } [bodytext] => Why won’t you talk to me? You can say anything at all.
You can make fun of me; you can push me in the hall
I need to know you are aware that I’m here
I’m speaking to you and I’m shivering in fear

I don’t always ask for people to even acknowledge me
But you’re my prized possession. Others can leave me be
I miss your voice and the way you made me feel
You may not know this…but that’s a big deal

I haven’t felt this way…ever. Whatever it is, I want it bad
You left me and I just crave that feeling, you’re driving me mad!
I’m clueless as to what you are doing to make me feel this way
But what I know for sure is that I want it to stay

Obviously when you leave all the feelings disappear
All the happiness and confidence, then I just fill up with fear
I need you here with me; I need you by my side
When you make up your mind…tell me what you decide [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kelseigh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
I NEED you

Contributed by Kelseigh on Friday, 21st December 2012 @ 03:08:39 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Why won’t you talk to me? You can say anything at all.
You can make fun of me; you can push me in the hall
I need to know you are aware that I’m here
I’m speaking to you and I’m shivering in fear

I don’t always ask for people to even acknowledge me
But you’re my prized possession. Others can leave me be
I miss your voice and the way you made me feel
You may not know this…but that’s a big deal

I haven’t felt this way…ever. Whatever it is, I want it bad
You left me and I just crave that feeling, you’re driving me mad!
I’m clueless as to what you are doing to make me feel this way
But what I know for sure is that I want it to stay

Obviously when you leave all the feelings disappear
All the happiness and confidence, then I just fill up with fear
I need you here with me; I need you by my side
When you make up your mind…tell me what you decide




Copyright © Kelseigh ... [ 2012-12-21 03:08:39]
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Re: I NEED you (User Rating: 1 )
by Whiskurz on Friday, 21st December 2012 @ 03:22:08 AM AEST
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Your cadence and rhyme are that of a seasoned poet......A Well written piece indeed.....Whisk


Re: I NEED you (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Saturday, 22nd December 2012 @ 01:47:00 AM AEST
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I started writing at 14, myself, and you write much better than I did at that age. You've got talent, let it keep pouring thru.

-Everette




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