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Shadow on a finite light
Contributed by
rowenm
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Tuesday, 18th December 2012 @ 08:55:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Walk a lonely walk
it whispered
and it was odd
for me to hear
that strange voice
that felt so near;
told me to continue
in a narrow path
what I had always done
alone, on my own.
Walk a lonely walk…
Like a shadow on a finite light.
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rowenm
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2012-12-18 08:55:06]
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Re: Shadow on a finite light
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 18th December 2012 @ 09:26:30 AM AEST
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| I recognise, understand and know these words, great poetry is about true connections. |
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Re: Shadow on a finite light
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 01:06:46 AM AEST
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Eloquently written - this is a great piece of poetry right here. One that I can relate to so well. You had me hung on every word.
Keep up the good work.
-Everette |
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Re: Shadow on a finite light
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 19th December 2012 @ 04:54:07 AM AEST
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I felt every word, beautiful.
Hugssss
and you are not alone...... we all need to hold eachother up, even at times we need to walk that path alone, know a tiny shadow follows you.YOu arent alone.
Michelle |
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Re: Shadow on a finite light
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by alicewhite on
Friday, 21st December 2012 @ 06:09:25 PM AEST
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| we all walk the same path alone on our way home,,,beautiful words of wisdom you write in this poem,, love it |
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