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past tense

I wanna hold all your light in my hand

is the line he writes back in

his mind

She’s not telepathic, but she is surely

magic

and it would seem to him that she made him

feel, something more than

Real.

In all the lines I’ve written about you;

where do you disappear to?

He could never outgrow the space

She stitched her veins into his

The stars talk to me in your voice,

Do you know that? it’s your laughter i hear

in the storm clouds

In all his dreams, his spinning fantasises

She was the image that stared back at him

She could feel his eyes; even when he was away
staring through her skin

at her soul, her light, sketching every piece of
her beautiful being. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 33 [informant] => cherryamber [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Vanilla and Glass

Contributed by cherryamber on Tuesday, 11th December 2012 @ 01:12:45 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Vanilla and glass she whispers; it’s all in

past tense

I wanna hold all your light in my hand

is the line he writes back in

his mind

She’s not telepathic, but she is surely

magic

and it would seem to him that she made him

feel, something more than

Real.

In all the lines I’ve written about you;

where do you disappear to?

He could never outgrow the space

She stitched her veins into his

The stars talk to me in your voice,

Do you know that? it’s your laughter i hear

in the storm clouds

In all his dreams, his spinning fantasises

She was the image that stared back at him

She could feel his eyes; even when he was away
staring through her skin

at her soul, her light, sketching every piece of
her beautiful being.

Copyright Â© cherryamber ... [ 2012-12-11 01:12:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Vanilla and Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by NightMareShoGun on Tuesday, 11th December 2012 @ 12:07:22 PM AEST
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good job

Re: Vanilla and Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by Kailas on Tuesday, 11th December 2012 @ 06:00:03 PM AEST
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Great write! thanks for sharing :)

Re: Vanilla and Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Wednesday, 12th December 2012 @ 10:47:04 AM AEST
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this poem is a great poem. i would love to read more from you. plus i know how that feel is. good writing. keep writing.

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