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Array ( [sid] => 17442 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => What Happened To You? [time] => 2003-05-12 06:05:00 [hometext] => This is to one of my Gurls. I miss you, Kacee.

Leave comments please. [bodytext] => What happened to you?
I miss you.
Why did you have to go?
We were best friends.

I knew you smoked weed when we became friends. It didn't bother me. Not until you let it take over your life.

I realise that your life hasn't been easy. I know that your just trying to cope. You've alway been a rebel.But you became blind.

When you pierced your nose, I laughed, calling you crazy. But still thinking it was cool.
When you dyed your hair, I shook my head and smiled.

But its getting worse. You come to school, either high or ***** off. You take it out on me and other friends. What happened to you? I miss ya, gurl.

You get into fights and break the law. You took up a gang in your trailor park. Thats what you tell people, when they ask about the bandana tied to your leg.

Where'd you go? Why did you leave?
Did you forget about us? I'm not the only one who thinks this. Some of your old friend have becomed feared of you. Are you so blind that you don't know this?

I think The answer is YES.

Why did you choose weed over me? Is our friendship no longer important to you? Obviously not. But why? I just don't understand, and I don't think I ever will. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 297 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Desi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
What Happened To You?

Contributed by Desi on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



What happened to you?
I miss you.
Why did you have to go?
We were best friends.

I knew you smoked weed when we became friends. It didn't bother me. Not until you let it take over your life.

I realise that your life hasn't been easy. I know that your just trying to cope. You've alway been a rebel.But you became blind.

When you pierced your nose, I laughed, calling you crazy. But still thinking it was cool.
When you dyed your hair, I shook my head and smiled.

But its getting worse. You come to school, either high or ***** off. You take it out on me and other friends. What happened to you? I miss ya, gurl.

You get into fights and break the law. You took up a gang in your trailor park. Thats what you tell people, when they ask about the bandana tied to your leg.

Where'd you go? Why did you leave?
Did you forget about us? I'm not the only one who thinks this. Some of your old friend have becomed feared of you. Are you so blind that you don't know this?

I think The answer is YES.

Why did you choose weed over me? Is our friendship no longer important to you? Obviously not. But why? I just don't understand, and I don't think I ever will.




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Re: What Happened To You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Good_King_Bragi on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 09:40:07 PM AEST
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The most painful thing is...to see the people you love most...losing the values and attributes...which you love, or rather loved them for...those attributes which are the core personality of a human being.




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